Do you see the poem
happening to me when I look at you?
I know I do,
a hint of rose on your skin,
whispering
of something unspoken, every inhale
drawn with intent.
And now, the garden stirs around us,
will you stay forever?
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Posted for Quadrille #216 – Can You Take a Hint @dVerse Poets Pub
36 Responses
I love the romance in your quadrille, Sanaa, and the idea of a poem happening to you.
Aww gosh! Thank you so much, my dearest Kim 😍 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Let the poem be love and love be a poem… well done.
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Sanaa, reading your poem felt like picking a luscious piece of chocolate out of a box. So tasty!
That is such high praise! Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
I confess there are magic in those words for a reader. They flow, the merge, they melt. That very last line just may just have the slightest hint of obsessive danger…
Thank you so much, Ain 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Your poem is full of hints of seduction and romance and the first line is so gorgeous and profound, it made me pause and sigh. Wonderful, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
How romantic, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Nolcha 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
The opening lines are gorgeous and the poem as a whole hits of a romantic interlude.
Thank you so much, Truedessa 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
So nice to read another one of your poems. I love the idea of a poem happening to you.
Thank you so much, Jenna 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Beautifully done, Sanaa!
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Very romantic
Thank you so much, Di 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
something so secretively seductive Sanaa <3
Thank you so much, Laura 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Beautiful poem, Sanaa! The romance made me sigh.
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Thank you so much, Yvette 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
How seductively romantic, Sanaa! No one can write like you. 💗💗
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
This is so stirring, Sanaa! Beautiful~
Thank you so much, Jeniffer 😀 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
I love the first three lines especially.
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“Do you see the poem
happening to me when I look at you?”
Just awesome, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Jan 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
“Do you see the poem
happening to me when I look at you?”
My husband and I were just talking about this. How some people bring you out in the most beautiful way.
Beautiful.
That’s so nice to know! Thank you so much, Alicia 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Love is the unrhymed poem. This is lovely.
Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️