
Stark silhouette against the sky;
Echo: Aye
Structure such to make one sigh.
Echo: Sigh
The beacon shone till far away;
Echo: Way
Guiding those who fall astray.
Echo: Stray
Heralding dreams unto tidal squalls;
Echo: All
Flashes of light do memories recall.
Echo: Call
Lasting memories, swirling thoughts;
Echo: Ought
Time is short and can’t be bought.
Echo: Sought
The lighthouse alone observes the tide;
Echo: Tied
To weather the storms as our guide.
Echo: Side
Its elegance leaves at loss for words;
Echo: Heard
At the moment – the heart has stirred.
Echo: Purred
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I have always found the lighthouse being a friend and a great symbol. I can feel it talking back to you giving solace.
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Lighthouses have always carried great symbolism to me. It is a wonderful view so I would give a purr. Ha. Another nice echo verse
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I like the device of the echo, It underscores or reinforces your message,.
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The lighthouse, sometimes the only savior out at sea. A wonderful piece indeed, well done!
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A lighthouse exhibits measure of resoluteness. Not any one can stand the boredom and loneliness of a ‘keeper all alone! Takes a special breed! Nice echoes Sanaa!
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The echo form is so effective. .. lighthouse echoing/confirming safety. Thank you so much for participating in the prompt!
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This is very well done, Sanaa. I do like the effect of your echo. It adds a new dimension to the verse.
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I love the way the echo was entwined with the rest of the poem.
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This is my favorite line: “Time is short and canβt be bought.
Echo: Sought”
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I’ve not tried this form, and admire your effort ~
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Very clever with the echo form! It works so well with a light house given its intervaled beam. K.
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Excellent work, Sanaa…those echos work SO well for this topic…I love the way lighthouses sound. π
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