A feeling of joy like drops of rain;
Though night is gone – the stars remain.
When words flow through like river stream;
Give voice to fulfilling hopes and dreams.
Words more precious than pots of gold;
Quite a vision for one to behold.
Feel emotions rise from beneath their fold.
The power has consumed its subjects fully;
The joy of breathing – writing poetry.
Our world is one big global community;
Together we embrace this opportunity.
Raise our pen – share thoughts and views;
No matter which path we tend to choose.
In life each heart adds up to the story;
The joy of breathing – writing poetry.
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Form: Rondeau
Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United
Posted on Open Link Night @ dVerse Pub
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It is like breathing . A taking in and breathing back out. I do love the feeling too when it flows and you seem to barely have any control of it.
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Already caught this one yesterday, but hope you are having a great Thursday. I will refresh and see if you have something new too.
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There is nothing quite like writing poetry and finding others love reading it; as I do with yours Sanaa.
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You’ve perfectly expressed about the joys of poetry…to the poets it’s like breathing…ah…nothing like poetry….& congrats!
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PS: Thank you.. I m so excited 😀
I agree…writing poetry is like the joy of breathing. Lovely poem.
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Gold disappears. Words never do. Words are enduring wealth. Thank you for your praise of poetry.
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“In life each heart adds up to the story;
The joy of breathing – writing poetry.”
Indeed; Have a nice Wednesday
much love…
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Such a delightful poem, Sanaa. Loved it 🙂
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words are life and fill the wordsmith with so much joy.
I love the visuals – the pen and wordsmith become one.
Happy 100th!
Love to the Sun from the moon
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Oh this is lovely, Sanaa. You are very talented. I especially love “In life each heart adds up to the story.” That is so true.
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This is lovely, and so true. When it flows the feelings of joy cannot be denied ~ no matter the subject matter.
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Breathtakingly beautiful piece….. Oh, that feeling of joy – writing poetry…is universal, Sanaa. Great job….
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“the joy of breathing,” indeed. Just lovely.
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Our world is one big global community;
Together we embrace this opportunity.
Raise our pen – share thoughts and views……. I love that part and feel it, too.
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Sanaa, you’ve written what I think we all feel. I love the gentleness and sensitivity of your poem.
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Nice – the community of poets.
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Big smiles here! Thank you for capturing the joy . . .
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Poetry and breathing indeed go hand in hand. Breathing out, breathing in. Writing. They go SO well together. Really a very nice poem, Sanaa.
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Well said. Poetry is all these things. It truly is our life blood.
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In life each heart adds up to the story;
The joy of breathing – writing poetry.
Rightly so Sanaa! There cannot be any one better to hold our attention and wonder!
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For me, your closing line captures the essence that resonates…such beauty and truth in your poem!
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poetry is fresh air breathed in and a catharsis exhaled.
lovely epression, mi amiga
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Oh yes, the joy of writing poetry !!
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what a wonderful thought – a beautiful expression of your vision- is needed to be recognised universally. Well done, Sanaa. Nasreen
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Thanks for linking up at my Sunday Lime today Sanaa. Have a nice Sunday
Much love…
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You certainly make it sound easy, Sanaa. Although some poems gush out of poets like water being poured out of the jug, others generate great birthing pains and the joy of creation is often clothed in raiments of great suffering…
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Wonderful to see this again, Sanaa. It is obvious that you find SO much joy in writing poetry! Thanks for sharing here at Open Link as well.
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The joy of writing and reading.. that’s the sole purpose of our existence.. love the cadence of this ode to what we all love. The smell of ink and the magic that we can do with words.
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Posting early you have poked a lovely stick into that joy that hopefully many of us experience. I love the tribute to give to our international group of poetic dog poets running in the dVerse pack.
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Beautiful thoughts Sanaa and you are right, poetry and the community it brings is a breath of fresh air.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
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It is indeed the joy of writing poems ~ Thanks for sharing this Sanaa ~
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Some days less joy than others… but that’s just me. Your joy shines through every line.
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The stars remain….how lovely and how that truly expresses the joy of poetry…the stars always remain.
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So nicely described, and I like how you include our world community in it. It shows that there should be a possibility for unity between people–at least here it is.
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I love the truth in this, and the sense of shared destiny, we are all poets in one way or another. So nice to “hear” the joy in your words.
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This made me tear up. I love poetry just that much. Thanks for sharing and capturing our joy. We’re privileged to be able to experience poetry’s love language.
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I think it was Tom Stoppard who said, and I’m quoting liberally here, that words are sacred. If you get the right words, in the right order you can nudge the world a little. Your words have done just that, the joy of it resounds and it is a most moving thing.
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A sweet heARt is PoetRy Free..
Sings a song.. so true and light
reins darkness pain
reigns to..
rains
us so
cold
and warm
so REAL..:)
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Your first two lines say it for me and writing/ reading sweet poetry 🙂
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To a poet, this IS the joy of breathing.
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This pen certainly lives up to your blog name! and you worked the form beautifully ~
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It is a joy! And you have captured it well in your poem 🙂
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