Budapest, one that illustrates scenery
and spirit
in starkly vivid and cataloged images,
the city whose light
dances on Danube waters,
it’s clear that they echo juxtaposition of light and dark,
of stillness and movement,
highlighting
the vibrant rhythm that pulsates through the streets,
but wait, how is it
that legs won’t move an inch?
I am frozen in place, for what reason that is yet
to be revealed,
for now, the scent of cologne and tobacco
fills the senses,
I am reminded of a dusky afternoon
when “Carl Sandburg’s voyeuristic
“Night Windows,” is being read and appreciated,
sort of like roseate clouds
hovering above the silence of glens.
It feels as though a dream within a dream.
The city wants only to be here tomorrow,
he explains, with frenzied hands
drawing on the canvass, as the mind
drifts dimly
to heaven’s height, only to augment in
a millisecond
as his lips touch the forehead,
“you’re exhausted, my darling, come
let us take rest.”
It’s lovely isn’t it, how we forget our
bearings, wrapped deep
and dark in thought,
around us the barbed-wire-hemmed,
wild oaken fence
and the barracks are weightless, as the moon absorbs
them and that’s when it strikes me,
humility
is what causes one to halt in their tracks.
Should one miss a lover’s touch,
stop, and think of the world and its chaos,
perhaps, then the incessant thrumming
of heart, won’t matter.
I am alive and writing poems while
lounging in bed,
swinging between idealistic hopes for the future
and the somewhat less perfect reality.
Goodness,
is that the alarm? Darn it! I am late!
Photo credits: Pinterest
For Truedessa’s guest prompt at dVerse where we are invited to write a poem based
on a dream. Come join us! 🩷
I love the dreamscape to Budapest, with the scent of cologne to hearing “Carl Sandburg’s voyeuristic “Night Windows,”. Also love the ending stanza, the writing of poems in a dreamland, and waking up to the alam. You captured a dream within a dream.
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
This does sound like a marvelous dream and darn that alarm for interrupting the beauty of the dreamscape. A dream within a dream for sure. You have captured many wondrous details of a dream.
Thank you so much, Truedessa 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
(and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🥂
A wonderful dream, Sanaa. I’ve been to Budapest, and I love the light dancing on Danube waters, the ‘juxtaposition of light and dark, of stillness and movement’, and ‘the scent of cologne and tobacco’, which I remember clearly. I smiled at the ending and the waking up to the alarm.
Thank you so much, my dearest Kim 😍 so glad you enjoyed it! 💄❤️
Reading your poem while lounging in bed, am I. Didn’t sleep much wrestling with my leopard. But yes, I am alive. Such an affirmation!
Thank you so much, Eric 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
So many great details! Love being transported to Budapest (and the photo is a beauty, too) and simply images like barb-wire-hemmed fences.
Thank you so much, Chris 😀 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
“Goodness,
is that the alarm? Darn it! I am late!”
Great wake up call😊
much🤍love
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you! 💄❤️
Much love back to you!
Dreams sure convince us that we live between worlds, and the between-ness of them is both haunting and daunting – a misty challenge — Poetry has for a long time seemed the closest language to dreaming, a syntax between dailiness and mystery. Such artistic clarity in the dream-canvas, stilled and pure where daylife flows fast by.
Thank you so much, Brendan 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
That photo is amazing, and I got drawn right into the dream. I especially love the lines at the end, somewhere between hope and reality.
Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Wow, Sanaa! I loved how you evoked the city, and how it felt ethereal and concrete simultaneously!
I kept thinking of the film “Inception” for some reason,too.
Brilliant!
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
You pulled us right into the city, and yet kept the surreal feel of the dream. Wonderful, Sanaa!
❤️❤️❤️
I love how you capture those elements of dreams that confound, why won’t the legs move and so forth, wonderful poem Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Paun 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
I really love this! Dreams are such a good inspiration for poems, I find. I love the parts where first the speaker is unable to budge and then later figures out why she is halted in her tracks. Very smoothly done!
I had to track you down because I had not seen you around in a while. I have been reading a book, part of which takes place in Penang. I expect you know it. The author obviously fell in love with the place. Anyway, I love your poem and am glad to see that you are still writing away.
Awww gosh! Thanks for stopping by, Shay! I am so pleased you liked the poem 💄❤️
PS: Yes I do know about it 🥰