There’s no one more desirable,
please, if you will,
gift me a sigh,
can not deny.
These days I feel you in my pulse,
dulce, dulce,
in sound of lips,
rolling of ships.
You are dangerously kind; as
smooth as blues, jazz,
break open all doors—
come make me yours.
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44 Responses
Wow… what a wonderful use of the form… I am very impressed on how you managed to give it such a romatic meaning.
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
I love how this worked for you – sweet, romantic and good use of the short syllabic verses.
Cheers!
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
(and thank you for the glorious prompt) Cheers! 🌹
I like the little dare at the end, romance at its best! 💞
Thank you so much, Tricia 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Haaha! Delightful tone, and lines, but so smooth, too, I mean…”smooth as blues, jazz,”…and the line after…sizzingly sensual…you’ll have your readers fainting with such verses soon! Lovely little poem…
Thank you so much, Ain 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Love it all, esp closing line. Great use of form.
Thank you so much, Ron 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Life is full of the unintended. Love this!
Thank you so much, Mary 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
small and perfectly formed
❤️❤️❤️
Wow you still went the way of romantic. Nice one
Much love…
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Much love back..
No matter how melancholy I an feeling, and I enjoy feeling melancholy — you always warm my mood and stir my spirit Sanaa. 🙂
Thank you so much, Rob 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Beautiful Sanaa.
❤️❤️❤️
Ravishing write, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Lynn 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
“gift me a sigh.” – nice phrase
Thank you so much, Tzvi 🙂 so good to see you 💄❤️
It runs smooth Sanaa! Good choice of subject!
Hank
Thank you so much, Hank 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Romantic with a dash of dare – beautifully done Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Marion 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
So romantic!
Thank you so much, Mrityunjay 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
“in sound of lips,
rolling of ships”
Oh that is such an evocative line, so much romance in so few words, bravo.
Thank you so much, Raivenne 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Sigh! Only you could have written a delightful love poem in this form! Gorgeous, Sanaa!❤️❤️
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
You induced a mini-swoon in me with this, Sanaa. Dulce dulce indeed!
Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
You do romance so well, Sanaa. It’s definitely your forte!
Thank you so much, Gayle 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
I knew you’d take a romantic angle, lovely!
*wink* Thank you so much, Kate 😀 I thought to challenge myself a little 💄❤️
Beautiful, and haunting in the romance!
Thank you so much, Liesl 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
I really like this. The form is so demanding, but you’ve made it flow, and I love the wistful yet strong feelings expressed.
Thank you so much, Hedgewitch 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️