Sentiments

Spread the love

With my eyes shut tight, I pictured marigold
yellow, and oh tangerine blossoms bursting;
soon after, I figured it was but the onset of
love.
💞
Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain
I look towards the sky as the wind around me
whispers, the only sound which I hear is your
name.
💞
You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
You are mystic incantations of whispered love.
💞
The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
nervousness with a twist of burning curiosity’s
intoxicating as dusk falls with draping shadows.
💞
I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
Even go through the process of bliss and pain,
Just to have another chance with you again.

 

Photo credits: www.hdnicewallpapers.com

Form: Twitter Poetry i.e. in 140 characters.

Posted on celebrations @ dVerse Pub

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Posted on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

 

Comments

  1. Grace says:

    Love the lyrical verses filled with hope, anticipation and mystic incantations of whispered love. That last stanza is my favorite. Thanks for joining us Sanaa ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Grace,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, lots of love ?
      xoxo

  2. Five wonderful, wistful & romantic stanzas, all a Twitter over lost love; rocked the prompt–impressive.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Glenn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  3. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    Stunning, Sanaa. You do have a way with the romantic!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gayle,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, lots of love ?
      xoxo

  4. Bjorn says:

    Each stanza another wonderful color.. Each stanza a poem by itself.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    2. Björn says:

      Wonderful to make a second visit….

      1. Sanaa says:

        Thanks for stopping by Bjorn 😀

  5. Sumana Roy says:

    Love the yearning at the end….beautiful…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sumana,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, lots of love ?
      xoxo

  6. Beautiful and lyrical, Sanaa. I like the way you have used alliteration and assonance to create an image of lips kissing in the line: ‘ Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain’ and metaphors and simile in ‘You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page/Your verse entangles with both hope and desire’. And you’ve written each stanza in 140 characters!
    Superb! Much love, Kim xx

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kim,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, lots of love ?
      xoxo

  7. Sanaa: I never thought of Twitter as such a wonderous and romantic form of communications.
    This is amazing — a tribute and a whispered wish in one.
    Thanks for participating.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Lorraine,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, lots of love ?
      xoxo

  8. Bryan Ens says:

    Beautiful love poem(s). Especially loved the first line of the 3rd stanza.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bryan,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  9. Imelda says:

    Each stanza is a lovely gem. The first one brings the thrill of falling in love. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Imelda,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  10. kaykuala h says:

    I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
    Just to have another chance with you again.

    How very sweet when one is with a loved one. The world opens up to a lot of eventualities!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it ?
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  11. Vinay Leo R. says:

    “You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
    Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
    You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”

    This is marvellous 🙂 my favorite lines from this piece, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Vinay 🙂 it was a difficult prompt.

  12. Jae Rose says:

    I love the imagery in the opening verses — the colours and smells intoxicating – who wouldn’t want to go back and have them again.. you are a true romantic 🙂 ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Jae ❤ so glad you liked it 😀

  13. Old Egg says:

    I wish someone would say that about me! How beautifully expressive love is expressed in this poem Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 🙂

  14. Susan says:

    My favorite line (and verse): “The cocktail of your beauty”
    This poem is a great gathering of crystal moments.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Susan ❤️

  15. Mary says:

    Yes, some experiences are worth it! Love, even though it sometimes ends, is one of those experiences not to regret.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thank you so much, Mary 🙂

  16. What a gorgeous line: “You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”

    Fantastic stanza:
    “The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
    nervousness with a twist of burning curiosity’s
    intoxicating as dusk falls with draping shadows.”

    I enjoyed this very much.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you 🙂 glad you enjoyed it.

  17. Sherry Marr says:

    So beautiful, romantic and loving, with gorgeous closing lines.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry ❤️

  18. Truedessa says:

    The magic of love does cast spells and unfortunately when the spell is broken there is a great sense of loss. How does one recapture the beauty?

    1. Sanaa says:

      Something to think about. Thanks for stopping by 🙂

  19. Julian says:

    A poem full of romance; beautifully put across.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Julian 🙂

  20. Beautiful! Particularly the last verse–you are a romantic!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you Audrey ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂

  21. Elizabeth says:

    Romantic and dreamy,

    Elizabeth

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Elizabeth 🙂

  22. ayala says:

    Sweet love….intimate and romantic.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Ayala ❤️ so glad you liked it.

  23. Sumana Roy says:

    “You are mystic incantations of whispered love.” aha…the soul of this beautiful love poem…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Sumana ❤️ so glad you liked the poem 😀

  24. humbird says:

    Some magic in your words and images, love transforms us in mysterious way…inspiring poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  25. Her Voice says:

    Beautifully romantic. The whole poem is intoxicating.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂

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