With my eyes shut tight, I pictured marigold
yellow, and oh tangerine blossoms bursting;
soon after, I figured it was but the onset of
love.
💞
Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain
I look towards the sky as the wind around me
whispers, the only sound which I hear is your
name.
💞
You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
You are mystic incantations of whispered love.
💞
The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
nervousness with a twist of burning curiosity’s
intoxicating as dusk falls with draping shadows.
💞
I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
Even go through the process of bliss and pain,
Just to have another chance with you again.
Photo credits: www.hdnicewallpapers.com
Form: Twitter Poetry i.e. in 140 characters.
Posted on celebrations @ dVerse Pub
Posted on Poetry Pantry @ Poets United
52 Responses
Love the lyrical verses filled with hope, anticipation and mystic incantations of whispered love. That last stanza is my favorite. Thanks for joining us Sanaa ~
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Five wonderful, wistful & romantic stanzas, all a Twitter over lost love; rocked the prompt–impressive.
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Stunning, Sanaa. You do have a way with the romantic!
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Each stanza another wonderful color.. Each stanza a poem by itself.
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Wonderful to make a second visit….
Thanks for stopping by Bjorn 😀
Love the yearning at the end….beautiful…
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Beautiful and lyrical, Sanaa. I like the way you have used alliteration and assonance to create an image of lips kissing in the line: ‘ Poinsettias poise with drops of morning rain’ and metaphors and simile in ‘You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page/Your verse entangles with both hope and desire’. And you’ve written each stanza in 140 characters!
Superb! Much love, Kim xx
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Sanaa: I never thought of Twitter as such a wonderous and romantic form of communications.
This is amazing — a tribute and a whispered wish in one.
Thanks for participating.
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Beautiful love poem(s). Especially loved the first line of the 3rd stanza.
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Each stanza is a lovely gem. The first one brings the thrill of falling in love. 🙂
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I would live a thousand lives a thousand times
Just to have another chance with you again.
How very sweet when one is with a loved one. The world opens up to a lot of eventualities!
Hank
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“You are poetry which spills like ink upon a page
Your verse entangles with both hope and desire
You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”
This is marvellous 🙂 my favorite lines from this piece, Sanaa.
Thank you so much Vinay 🙂 it was a difficult prompt.
I love the imagery in the opening verses — the colours and smells intoxicating – who wouldn’t want to go back and have them again.. you are a true romantic 🙂 ❤️
Thank you so much Jae ❤ so glad you liked it 😀
I wish someone would say that about me! How beautifully expressive love is expressed in this poem Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Robin 🙂
My favorite line (and verse): “The cocktail of your beauty”
This poem is a great gathering of crystal moments.
Thank you so much Susan ❤️
Yes, some experiences are worth it! Love, even though it sometimes ends, is one of those experiences not to regret.
Definitely ❤️ thank you so much, Mary 🙂
What a gorgeous line: “You are mystic incantations of whispered love.”
Fantastic stanza:
“The cocktail of your beauty, arousal and the
nervousness with a twist of burning curiosity’s
intoxicating as dusk falls with draping shadows.”
I enjoyed this very much.
Thank you 🙂 glad you enjoyed it.
So beautiful, romantic and loving, with gorgeous closing lines.
Thank you so much, Sherry ❤️
The magic of love does cast spells and unfortunately when the spell is broken there is a great sense of loss. How does one recapture the beauty?
Something to think about. Thanks for stopping by 🙂
A poem full of romance; beautifully put across.
Thank you so much, Julian 🙂
Beautiful! Particularly the last verse–you are a romantic!
Thank you Audrey ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Romantic and dreamy,
Elizabeth
Thank you so much Elizabeth 🙂
Sweet love….intimate and romantic.
Thanks Ayala ❤️ so glad you liked it.
“You are mystic incantations of whispered love.” aha…the soul of this beautiful love poem…
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Some magic in your words and images, love transforms us in mysterious way…inspiring poem.
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Beautifully romantic. The whole poem is intoxicating.
Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂