Repeatedly, a kiss then becomes rain

Here I am in the midst of it all,
not even a blue-black cloud and yet your mist is written
all over me–
the lit fuse of your lips soft and sensual
beckons, come take me down
and I realize
you are the only possible remedy for my parched landscape.
I am powerless,
for the moment I open my mouth,
the moment I attempt to speak, I am hushedโ€”

the earnestness of your chiseled features is enough to bowl me over.

A floating sensation; unexplained
I find I am unable to think clearly until daylight
shapes your face,
perhaps this is the new normal
the lipstick upon my coffee cup belittles me for delaying too muchโ€”
how long must a confession be?
I ask the heat of the sun most precariously.
โ€œAs long as it takes for the fume of his sighs to meld with yours
completely.โ€

 

 

 

Photo credits: Pinterest

Day Nineteen ~ Get Listed

Word List: Sensual, features, blue, mouth

Skylover Wordlist: Beckon ๐Ÿ’

Posted for “Get Listed: Poems in April Edition” @ Real Toadsย 

Posted on the Writers’ Pantry @ Poets and Storytellers United

42 thoughts on “Repeatedly, a kiss then becomes rain

  1. Old Egg says:

    Love is all about melding with your partner so in the end a look or even a glance ties the two of you together. What a beautful poem this is Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin ๐Ÿ™‚ so glad the poem resonated with you ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  2. Ahhh! And that’s a rapturous sigh from over here, just contemplating these lovely words and soulful images.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  3. Youโ€™ve infused so much passion into this poem, Sanaa, it almost melts! I particularly love the lines:
    โ€˜not even a blue-black cloud and yet your mist is written
    all over meโ€™;
    โ€˜you are the only possible remedy for my parched landscapeโ€™;
    and
    โ€˜the lipstick upon my coffee cup belittles me for delaying too muchโ€™.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim ๐Ÿ˜€ it’s actually a birthday gift for someone special, so I decided to go all out! ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  4. Kerry says:

    This is a hot and sensual write, Sanaa! Love it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  5. Wow, such passion – and truth. Excellently done.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Anthony ๐Ÿ™‚ so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  6. The last two lines left my heart full of sighs and knowings. Such a gloriously Sanaa poem, this one!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  7. Ellecee says:

    This is very romantic, sensual, and beautiful, a perfect gift for your friend๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒนโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ™

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ellecee ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  8. This is gorgeous Sanaa as is love! So many lovely lines!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Carrie ๐Ÿ˜€ so good to see you ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  9. Rommy says:

    Oh the headiness of loving so passionately!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rommy ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  10. Beautifully sensual Sanaa. The last 4 lines are stunning.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  11. Oh, so beautiful, Sanaa. “How long must a confession be?” Aching.

    1. Sanaa says:

      โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

  12. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    So much longing in this poem… I do wonder if it will come to fruition.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  13. Beautiful and sensual…Love your ending

    1. Sanaa says:

      โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

  14. gillena says:

    So full of romantic passion.
    “you are the only possible remedy for my parched landscape.”

    Happy Sunday, thanks for dropping by my sumie Sunday today

    Much๐Ÿ’›love

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena ๐Ÿ˜€ so good to see you ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

      much love …

  15. So much said through your lips. I think your poems have been fired in a kiln.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Colleen ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  16. Oh, Sanaa. You’ve done it again. This is another example of what I call your soft sensuality. A kiss that becomes the rain.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Joel ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  17. Wendy Bourke says:

    Passion put to words. THIS IS POETRY!

    1. Sanaa says:

      โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

  18. Vandana Sharma says:

    The april heat rises further with this sensuous poem!!!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vandana ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  19. Helen says:

    Your poems spring from a magic place, sensuous and deep.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Helen ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  20. Two sighs becoming one sounds just about perfect to me.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, MMT ๐Ÿ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  21. Barry says:

    Oh my. So very sensual. Lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Barry ๐Ÿ™‚ so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

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