Eyes full of moon, I write his name;
with glorious sense of yearning,
at night
I am discontent with the world;
since first hearing its voice, its song,
I weep.
Wrap your loneliness around me;
from umber to pink, spring blossoms,
come see.
I find that it is lips that urge
not clouds; in pure, perfect stillness,
he feels.
Muted hues and shades in turn beg;
romanticism calls to us,
and sings.
Let us break away from the past;
in doing so, evolve fairly,
he sees.
~~~~~*~~~~~~
Know that it’s dark and tormenting;
a choice and a way of living,
he thinks.
The question is are you prepared;
and if yes, then to what extent,
tell me.
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30 Responses
Muted yet lush, romantic and still testing, I really liked this a lot.
Thank you so much, Christopher 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
I love the gentle walk to that conclusion in the end… romantic and feels very true
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
I can feel the yearning and love those shades of spring season. The question at the end, gives me pause and indeed really depends on the answer. Lovely theme for the poem Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
(and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🌹
Return of Romance…hurrah. Very clever to morph from dreamy to pragmatic; good twist. Lots of love-making in the Spring, versus inactive winter bundling.
Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Poignant question posed in closing
MUCH💜LOVE
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Much love back..
Oh, this is eonderful Sanaa, quite excellent! 🙂✌🏼❤️
Thank you so much, Rob 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
A beautiful swirl of a lover and the world, leading up to the superb last stanza..
Thank you so much, Ain 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Lips do indeed urge … the question you end with demands a response! Well done.
Thank you so much, my dearest Helen 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
“if yes, then to what extent.”
Absolutely! Thanks for stopping by, Tzvi 💄❤️
I echo Glenn’s comment. Wonderful turning from daydreams to pragmatics.
Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
“Eyes full of moon, I write his name;
with glorious sense of yearning,”
Wonderful phrasing!
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Such a glorious opening stanza, Sanaa and I love the question at the end. Beautifully written. ❤️❤️
Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Profound portrayal of what it is to feel. I love the last line… Reminds me of a line from a song
‘How much of my love is insane to some degree’
Thank you so much, Sangeetha 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
hmmmmnn…. this one is deep – Sanaa – a real “thinking” poem! very powerful, really.
Thank you so much, Ben 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
I love the opening “eyes full of moon” and the gorgeous rhythm of the words throughout. 😍
Thank you so much, Jenna 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️