
Midnight in the realm of good and evil when thus
clock begins to chime; of ragged stars and restless
thoughts merging betweenย clandestine clouds. Lo!
our mind wanders to unknown places; along with
the air in our lungs and blood in our veins. Desire,
whim, impulse, temptation beckon towards their
pier again.
Thus night howled and screamed again; creatures
both light and dark struggle to resist the inevitable
change. Theย crescent above whispered tales of gore;
through bitter storms in the height of battle. Thus
Elysium fieldsย shriveled to dust. “Lo! we’re double-
edged blades for every time we sharpen our faith,
the return stroke straps back vice again.”
Frozen eternal and cursed with blight;
The soul however is fringed with light.
Photo credits:ย wall.alphacoders.com
Enjoyed this poem very much. Who knows what dwells in those midnight hours. Your vision is vivid and exciting. I love the picture,,,,,
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The term “ragged stars” is just too gorgeous. And then you top it off with this:
… “and restless
thoughts merging between clandestine clouds.”
Just beautiful, Sanaa.
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I agree with De. Beautiful phrases
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“restless
thoughts merging between clandestine clouds.โ
Oh the mood that evokes! Nicely done.
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I am really in love with this one, “Thus night howled and screamed again; creatures
both light and dark struggle to resist thus inevitable change.” Love this!! Chaos of twilight.
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My mind does too much midnight wandering/wondering. You verse is a beautiful expression of creativity.
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Wonderful, Sanaa! Nice to see you going a bit dark for a change, and doing it with such accomplishment. And then the perfect return to light at the end. I think this is one of your best.
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Oh we are often both at the same time… there is a yin and yang.. dark and light inside every human heart.
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Such a dramatic piece of art and your lines live up to it perfectly. I love the image of this eternal struggle between light and dark elements.
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Yes the thoughts in the deep of night can be bitter sweet. So many lovely lines in this Sanaa!!
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Love clandestine clouds and your closing line…wonderful write and amazing image!
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Your poem read like Poe Sanaa! Impressive words and I liked the image you used it if perfect with it.
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