Lover of Words

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You are a lover of words because when you speak;
The heart must pause enough to breathe.
You are a lover of words because when you seek;
The clouds of fear shall suffer defeat.
You are a lover of words with charm replete;
What once acerb transformed to sweet.
Because when lovers of words concur and greet;
The fortune as such maneuvers complete.

 

 

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Posted for Poetics @ dVerse Poets Pub

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42 Responses

  1. Victoria says:

    Great ending on this, Sanaa.

  2. Grace says:

    How sweet to have that lover of words ~

  3. Mary says:

    Ah, the clouds of fear suffering defeat — glad to hear about that. One cannot be disabled by one’s fears!

  4. In an important way, all of us who run with the dVerse pack are lovers of words, prizing communication above most things. You hit the high points; nice rhyme scheme too.

  5. Angie says:

    We are lovers of words. Sweet

  6. LOVE your rhyme and slant-rhyme choices here. So much.

  7. Your opening two lines are especially striking, for me. Well done!

  8. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    Your repetition is well used here, Sanaa.

  9. Candy says:

    oh yes, how true!

  10. Thotpurge says:

    Aah I chose the same one… wish lovers of words could change fortunes!

  11. Pleasant Street says:

    Cute poem.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Pleasant Street,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead

  12. Bryan Ens says:

    Some wonderful thoughts in this. I especially loved the line “the heart must pause to breathe. “

  13. I’m surprised, so far in reading, that not more of us chose this theme, seeing we’re all obviously in love with words. You wrote this well.

  14. lillian says:

    Love the twist to the “fortune” at the end. Well done! I enjoyed it very much.

  15. Smooth and flowing. Love it!

  16. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Oh I so hope we can change the word for that love of words (maybe also love of world)

  17. Sumana Roy says:

    What a stellar close Sanaa!….love this poem…

  18. Sara McNulty says:

    You have an amazing rhyming skill, Sanaa! I love this.

  19. Your poem made my heart sing! Happy Valentine’s Day, my friend.

    • Sanaa says:

      Hello Rose,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

      PS: Happy Valentine’s Day 😀

  20. gillena says:

    nice write Sanaa, excelling in appreciation

    Thanks for linking up ay Monday Writes today

    much love…

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