Love is more thicker than forget

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Poem inspired by the poetic masterpiece by E.E.Cummings “Love is thicker than forget.”

And I am deliberately yours;
in breath of eventide, rich dark skies
until every sigh,
every waking moment bears taste of
your nameβ€”romance blooms,
urging us descend into shivers unknown;
I’m breathless, fragrance
reverberating
in corners
of
my heart,
my heart, my heart.

 

 

 

 

Photo credits: “Midnight in Paris,” by Richard Blunt, Pinterest

Posted for Quadrille #134: We {heart} poems @dVerse Poets Pub

Comments

  1. De Jackson says:

    Okay, you KNOW when you begin with E.E. Cummings you’ve already got my heart. Yep. And then this gorgeousness:
    “rich dark skies
    until every sigh,”

    And that repeating heart(beat) at the end. So good.

    1. Thanks for pointing out that the repetition at the end is like a heartbeat. I didn’t catch that, but now I realize it’s amazing! πŸ™‚

      1. Sanaa says:

        Thank you so much, Jenna πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

    2. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  2. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    I love how you ended in repetition, just like the heart keeps beating which is a wonder in itself.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  3. Ohhhh. . .sigh. This is just so romantic, Sanaa! I love the ending repetition– like an echo.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Merril πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  4. Ingrid says:

    Oh yes – the rhythm of the heart encapsulated in an exquisite quadrille! Delightful, Sanaa ❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ingrid πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  5. Dora says:

    Sanaa,
    So beautiful, designed to get the deadest heart pumping.
    pax,
    dora

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Dora πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  6. gillena says:

    Another awesome romantic.
    Happy Monday

    Much❀love

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

      Much love back..

  7. Oh, I picked up on the throbbing lub-dub pulsing of that closing phrase right off the bat, Sanaa. Awesome work throughout. Salute!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ron πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  8. RedCat says:

    Your Quadrille is deliciously sensual and heart throbbing. Oh my! πŸ’–

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Helene πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  9. Masa says:

    Wow, simply stunning love language here. Excellent sensual notes, powerfully physical as each word drips with intent. Truly delightful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Masa πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  10. msjadeli says:

    It feels like the writer is caught up in a moment that goes on forever. Beautiful!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  11. Bev Crawford says:

    It’s many years ago, but I still remember the magic of love!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Beverly πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  12. Mary Hood says:

    Yes, the repetition at the end makes the romance never end.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mary πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  13. Lucy says:

    Beautifully romantic!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  14. K.Hartless says:

    Those corners of intimacy. Beautiful quadrille.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, K.Hartless πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  15. Beautifully breathtaking and sexy Sanaa! I ❀️ it ☺️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Christine πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  16. romance!! the beating blood!! Like many others, i love that repetition at the end

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bigfatcan πŸ™‚ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  17. urging us descend into shivers unknown;
    I’m breathless, fragrance reverberating

    Love and being in love can be breathtaking leaving one breathless. It is a good feel, Sanaa!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hank πŸ™‚ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  18. Selma Martin says:

    Sensual. Lovely. I could feel my own heart aligned to yours at the ending. So beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Selma πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  19. Punam says:

    This is delightfully romantic, Sanaa! I surely heart it. ❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Punam πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  20. Vandana Sharma says:

    Gorgeous!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  21. kittysverses says:

    You have a way with words. I enjoyed your poem, Sanaa. πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kitty πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  22. the repetition made clear the plea and intense passion. well done, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosema πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  23. Both the ending and the beginning were my favorite parts, Sanaa –

    I love the idea of being DELIBERATELY somebody’s, and I love the repetition that you used at the end… that was so LOVELY!

    <3
    David

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, David πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  24. Susan says:

    Your ending was masterful! A beating heart in words. Well done!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susan πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  25. Love the subtle onomatopoeia!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  26. Bill says:

    Lovely. Well done. Rich in romance.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bill πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  27. Helen says:

    I totally sank into every line .. every word … rapture in my heart.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Helen πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  28. Sanaa- I so love ‘in breath of eventide.’ So beautiful in true Sanaa style!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  29. This was a good poem for me to read after my quick meditation with essential oils this afternoon! The mention of breath and fragrance just seems so synchronous. The ending repetition really sticks! πŸ’“

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Tricia πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

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