Intuition

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Shall we sit and ponder;
Debate on right and wrong.
Or close an open window;
Start dancing to a song?

The rush of a beating heart;
Believe its so agile.
Though its hardly visible;
Its tiny and fragile.

We take a leap of faith;
And trust our intuition.
Sailing away from harbor;
Follow our ambition.

 

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Posted for Flash 55 Plus @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Manicddaily says:

    Great if you can follow that ambition! Sounds good. Thanks. K.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Karin,

      Thank you so much! Good to see you again 😀
      Glad you liked it. Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  2. Gail says:

    We should just trust our inner voice. Great poem.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gail,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  3. Beautifully done. I always admire people who handle rhyme well.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you for such a huge compliment 😀
      Glad you liked it! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  4. Sreejit says:

    Great advice for my day! Nice one.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sreejit,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked the poem 😀
      Highly appreciated! Enjoy the weekend 🙂

  5. Susan says:

    That tiny heart links to vast ambition through inner Light and intuition. Nice! Thanks, too, for the song.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susan,

      Thank you so much, glad you liked the combo 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  6. Kerry O'Connor says:

    Your have achieved a sound form poem in 55 words. Well done.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Enjoyed this challenge! Lots of love
      xoxo

  7. Bjorn says:

    To set sail and trust our inner compass is great.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked the poem 😀
      Highly appreciated! Enjoy the weekend 🙂

  8. blogoratti says:

    The Corrs…always a favourite.
    I enjoyed your poem, reads like a song.
    And thank you for your wishes!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Blogoratti,

      My pleasure 🙂 Glad you liked the poem 😀
      Highly appreciated! Enjoy the weekend 🙂

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello De Jackson,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week ahead!

  9. Such a beautifully positive piece. I am with Rosemary I admire those who can do rhyming so well. I am not good at it.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thanks for giving me such a huge compliment 😀
      Highly appreciated! Glad you liked it 🙂
      Lots of love
      xoxo

  10. Suyash_J says:

    over thinking over analyzing withers intuition , the art is to know when to be intuitive and when to be rational.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Suyash,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked the poem 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week ahead!

  11. Jim says:

    “Trust our intuition and follow our ambition” leads many business, Sanaa. In my former life (one of them) I taught a course in Entrapreneurship. Proper planning is also needed but many don’t.
    ..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jim,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week ahead!

  12. gillena says:

    you left us on a good note here

    “We take a leap of faith;
    And trust our intuition.
    Sailing away from harbor;
    Follow our ambition.”

    thanks for dropping in at my Monday WRites

    much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  13. Cleverly done… Bravo!
    ZQ

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sir,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week ahead!

  14. Sara McNulty says:

    Well done rhyming!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Sara,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 😀
      xoxo

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