And when I left you beneath cool cotton
sheets adored a moment soft, slow and
sensual born in the midst of a pearl grey
dawn. The shivers down my spine and
breath of muddled summer upon roses
told me everything I needed to know.
Photo credits: Stevepayneart
Posted On “Quadrille #56″ @ dverse Pub
And on ‘Tuesday Platform’ @ Real Toads
& on Monday Writes @ My Blog- Verses
Wow. You and Lill are on FIRE today with these. So steamy-gorgeous.
Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I love the image of the dawn and summer love.
Thank you so much, Kathy 😀 so good to see you ❤️
“Muddled summer upon roses” is really lovely.
Thank you so much, Maria 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Romantic and sensuous!
Thank you so much, Jo 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
I truly believe you should write a book of love poems! GORGEOUS!
Thank you so much, Lillian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
An absolute masterpiece. Sensual, erotic, and poignant, with some of the most deft turns of phrase I’ve ever read! Wonderful!
Aww gosh!❤️ Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️
A beautiful climax for sure! Well done!!
dwight
Thank you so much, Dwight 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
The shivers down my spine and
breath of muddled summer upon roses
told me everything I needed to know.
Fair intuition may save the day for young girls who may be overwhelmed!
Hank
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Hank ❤️
Oh that last line… sometimes our senses tell us everything we want to know..
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Bjorn ❤️
The shivers down my spine and
breath of muddled summer upon roses
told me everything I needed to know…………..Love this line.
Thank you so much, Julian 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
I love the imagery and internal rhyme of the lines:
‘…adored a moment soft, slow and
sensual born in the midst of a pearl grey
dawn’..
True romance, Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Kim 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Like the close… nicely done!!
Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so good to see you ❤️
I like the reference to “muddled summer” and the mystery of what one needed to know.
Thank you so much, Frank 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Now I want the story of what the speaker learned, of what she needed to know and discovered after all…
Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so good to see you ❤️
( I’ll share it with you in a bit 😉 )
Oh, that moment of clarity.
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Annell ❤️
This poem really does show one how to adore a moment. beautiful.
Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
So beautiful, sends your mind wandering.
Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Sensuous overdrive. Nice!!!
Much🌼love
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Much🌼love
A beautiful write Sanaa, the flow of the poem travels effortlessly towards ‘everything I needed to know’
Thank you so much, Xenia 😀 so good to see you ❤️
And in that moment we understand what we truly need and want… wonderfully deep and introspective! 💙
Thank you so much, Rebecca 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
A lovely evocative poem.
Thank you so much, Vivian 😀 so good to see you ❤️
very sensual… nicely written
Thank you so much, Robert 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
What a lovely poem!
Thank you so much, Jo 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Beautiful and sensual! Your poetry is always lovely Sanaa!!
❤️❤️❤️
A very thought provoking piece. So much more to this story. Well done.
Thank you so much, Maria 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
A sensual write Sanaa. That moment when you just know. Well done.
Thank you so much, Toni 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Those shivers may need more though, more than the writer wants.
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Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Jim ❤️
Gorgeously written…!!
Thank you so much, Sreeja 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
So very beautiful, Sanaa. I love what you did with muddle.
Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Oh I read this as an excerpt to a beautiful love story! I really like ” pearl grey dawn.” Gorgeous work, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
I adore, ‘pearl gray dawn’.
Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Comes the dawn, there is always new understanding, luv the underlying statements in this poem Sanaa. Thank you for linking to Monday WRites this week
much love…
My pleasure, Gillena 🙂
Much🌺love