In the midst of a pearl grey dawn

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And when I left you beneath cool cotton
sheets adored a moment soft, slow and
sensual born in the midst of a pearl grey
dawn. The shivers down my spine and
breath of muddled summer upon roses
told me everything I needed to know.

 

Photo credits: Stevepayneart

Posted On “Quadrille #56″ @ dverse Pub

And on ‘Tuesday Platform’ @ Real Toads

& on Monday Writes @ My Blog- Verses

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Comments

  1. De Jackson says:

    Wow. You and Lill are on FIRE today with these. So steamy-gorgeous.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  2. Kathy Reed says:

    I love the image of the dawn and summer love.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kathy πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  3. “Muddled summer upon roses” is really lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Maria πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  4. Jo says:

    Romantic and sensuous!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jo πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  5. lillian says:

    I truly believe you should write a book of love poems! GORGEOUS!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lillian πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  6. An absolute masterpiece. Sensual, erotic, and poignant, with some of the most deft turns of phrase I’ve ever read! Wonderful!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww gosh!❀️ Thank you so much, Frank πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it!❀️

  7. Dwight says:

    A beautiful climax for sure! Well done!!
    dwight

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Dwight πŸ™‚ so good to see you ❀️

  8. kaykuala says:

    The shivers down my spine and
    breath of muddled summer upon roses
    told me everything I needed to know.

    Fair intuition may save the day for young girls who may be overwhelmed!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by, Hank ❀️

  9. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Oh that last line… sometimes our senses tell us everything we want to know..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ˜€ thanks for stopping by, Bjorn ❀️

  10. Julian says:

    The shivers down my spine and
    breath of muddled summer upon roses
    told me everything I needed to know…………..Love this line.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Julian πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  11. I love the imagery and internal rhyme of the lines:
    ‘…adored a moment soft, slow and
    sensual born in the midst of a pearl grey
    dawn’..
    True romance, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  12. Thotpurge says:

    Like the close… nicely done!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  13. Frank says:

    I like the reference to “muddled summer” and the mystery of what one needed to know.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  14. Now I want the story of what the speaker learned, of what she needed to know and discovered after all…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

      ( I’ll share it with you in a bit πŸ˜‰ )

  15. Oh, that moment of clarity.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ˜€ thanks for stopping by, Annell ❀️

  16. Kerry says:

    This poem really does show one how to adore a moment. beautiful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  17. So beautiful, sends your mind wandering.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  18. gillena says:

    Sensuous overdrive. Nice!!!

    Much🌼love

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

      Much🌼love

  19. Xenia Tran says:

    A beautiful write Sanaa, the flow of the poem travels effortlessly towards ‘everything I needed to know’

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Xenia πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  20. Rebecca says:

    And in that moment we understand what we truly need and want… wonderfully deep and introspective! πŸ’™

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rebecca πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  21. Vivian Zems says:

    A lovely evocative poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Vivian πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  22. Robert says:

    very sensual… nicely written

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robert πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  23. Jo says:

    What a lovely poem!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jo πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  24. Beautiful and sensual! Your poetry is always lovely Sanaa!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  25. A very thought provoking piece. So much more to this story. Well done.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Maria πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  26. kanzensakura says:

    A sensual write Sanaa. That moment when you just know. Well done.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Toni πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  27. Jim says:

    Those shivers may need more though, more than the writer wants.
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by, Jim ❀️

  28. Gorgeously written…!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sreeja πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  29. So very beautiful, Sanaa. I love what you did with muddle.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Victoria πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  30. Mish says:

    Oh I read this as an excerpt to a beautiful love story! I really like ” pearl grey dawn.” Gorgeous work, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mish πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it ❀️

  31. Sara McNulty says:

    I adore, ‘pearl gray dawn’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  32. gillena says:

    Comes the dawn, there is always new understanding, luv the underlying statements in this poem Sanaa. Thank you for linking to Monday WRites this week

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      My pleasure, Gillena πŸ™‚

      Much🌺love

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