Flavour Me, Red

It’s a predicament, it’s a predicament,
it’s a saucer of urge–
unmistakably a loud speaker that cannot be located.
It’s angst filled poetry,
it’s shattering confessions to mute parts of the body.
Flavour me, red
make my mouth numb for several minutes;
why isn’t there a doorway that leads straight into
a pool of desire?
It’s hot whispers traveling from one ear to another
in a crowded room,
it’s the constant ebb and flow of a river.
It’s an open space, it’s delight in disorder–
it’s thinking one knows the other person well enough.

 

 

 

Photo credits: Paul Biddle Conceptual Art, Pinterest

Day Four ~ Caution: Tender Buttons

Posted for “Play It Again” @ Real Toads

16 thoughts on “Flavour Me, Red

  1. I love it! I think you’ve out-Gertruded Gertrude. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Bwahahahahahahhaha that was the plan!💄❤️ Thank you so much, Rosemary 😍 so glad you enjoyed it!💄❤️

  2. Kerry says:

    I love the idea of the hot pepper rendering the poet mute – an excellent trope.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️

  3. I agree with Rosemary, Sanaa! I love the ‘saucer of urge’ and ‘shattering confessions to mute parts of the body’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  4. Ellecee says:

    It’s a pepper all right❣️❣️Skillfully done👏

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❤️❤️❤️

  5. lillian says:

    Those first two lines….coupled with the image (where did you ever find that???) — HOT!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lillian 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️

  6. Absolutely beautiful Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

  7. Jim says:

    This was fun, Sanaa , even though it was hard for me to find meaning. But isn’t that the cubist art of Picasso that way.
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jim 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️

  8. Yes, hot pepper mute…love it. This stream of consciousness made me smile.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susie 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️

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