Flavour Me, Red

It’s a predicament, it’s a predicament,
it’s a saucer of urge–
unmistakably a loud speaker that cannot be located.
It’s angst filled poetry,
it’s shattering confessions to mute parts of the body.
Flavour me, red
make my mouth numb for several minutes;
why isn’t there a doorway that leads straight into
a pool of desire?
It’s hot whispers traveling from one ear to another
in a crowded room,
it’s the constant ebb and flow of a river.
It’s an open space, it’s delight in disorder–
it’s thinking one knows the other person well enough.

 

 

 

Photo credits: Paul Biddle Conceptual Art, Pinterest

Day Four ~ Caution: Tender Buttons

Posted for “Play It Again” @ Real Toads

16 Responses

  1. I love it! I think you’ve out-Gertruded Gertrude. 🙂

    • Sanaa says:

      Bwahahahahahahhaha that was the plan!💄❤️ Thank you so much, Rosemary 😍 so glad you enjoyed it!💄❤️

  2. Kerry says:

    I love the idea of the hot pepper rendering the poet mute – an excellent trope.

  3. I agree with Rosemary, Sanaa! I love the ‘saucer of urge’ and ‘shattering confessions to mute parts of the body’.

  4. Ellecee says:

    It’s a pepper all right❣️❣️Skillfully done👏

  5. lillian says:

    Those first two lines….coupled with the image (where did you ever find that???) — HOT!

  6. Absolutely beautiful Sanaa!

  7. Jim says:

    This was fun, Sanaa , even though it was hard for me to find meaning. But isn’t that the cubist art of Picasso that way.
    ..

  8. Yes, hot pepper mute…love it. This stream of consciousness made me smile.

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