Adoration

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Roses in their naivety wear blindfolds;
pastel red,
their fragrance, a moment transitory
that seeks

to align with the cosmos almost immediately.
I’d taken breathing for granted
until the day,
you stole the air from my lungs;
you are sweeter than any poem possible.

 

 

 

Photo credits: T.S Harris “Summer is for lovers,” Pinterest

De is our hostess today at dVerse and the word is β€œPossible.”
Come join us! πŸ’

Posted for Quadrille #116 @ dVerse Poets Pub

Comments

  1. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    I take breathing for granted… until you take my breath away.

    Make me think of this song
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WpIazkOqBVc

    1. Sanaa says:

      Oh gosh! I’d almost forgotten about this song! One of my favorites. Thank you so much, Bjorn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  2. De Jackson says:

    Wow, Sanaa. This is beautiful. I love where the word took you.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

      (and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🌹

  3. Ingrid says:

    ❀️🌹❀️what a perfect poem of love in only 44 words:
    ‘I’d taken breathing for granted
    until the day,
    you stole the air from my lungs’
    I LOVE it!!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Yayyy! Thank you so much, Ingrid πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  4. What a sweet love poem Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  5. Such a beautiful love poem, Sanaa! I too love the lines:
    β€˜I’d taken breathing for granted
    until the day,
    you stole the air from my lungs’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  6. Truly sweet, this romantic piece has the lightness of love, and the gravitas of a wonderful poet.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Glenn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  7. So beautifully romantic, Sanaa! Wow! That line about taking breathing for granted.
    And I’d forgotten about the song BjΓΆrn posted, too. πŸ˜€

    1. Sanaa says:

      Yes πŸ˜€ the song is a classic example of romance! Thank you so much, Merril πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  8. Lillian says:

    LOVE the image and always love your romantic flair, Sanaa!
    Love that last line πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lillian πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  9. Lucy says:

    Such a lovely and vivid romantic piece. Absolutely captivating. This is indeed adoration in its purest form.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Lucy πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  10. RedCat says:

    Lovely poem. So apt description of that feeling when kissing takes you breath away. πŸ’–

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  11. Debi Swim says:

    “I take breathing for granted… until you take my breath away.”
    Ahhhh, lovely

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Debi πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  12. calmkate says:

    ah true love had forgotten about those breathless moments!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kate πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  13. Gillena Cox says:

    gorgeous poetry!!!

    happy Monday

    MuchπŸ’love

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

      Happy Monday,
      much love …

  14. A beautiful romantic write.

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  15. Grace says:

    Sweet kiss….who can forget them, smiles.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Grace πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  16. lynn__ says:

    Sanaa, the romance in your poem is definitely breathtaking!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lynn πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  17. Mary says:

    Oh, how breathtaking a poem!

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  18. Breathtaking, Sanaa. LOVE it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ron πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  19. msjadeli says:

    Sanaa you are a woman in love as only one in love could be in such ecstasy. Nice to know love is still alive somewhere in the world <3

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lisa πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  20. I love the rose connection to the cosmos and that the human connection has the same possibilities!
    And yes… love is blind as well!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Dwight πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  21. Eric Erb says:

    I’m just inhaling this…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Eric πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  22. “you are sweeter than any poem possible”
    A classic close! Very romantic :))

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Mrityunjay πŸ™‚ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  23. ooooh. ooooh. my heart just melted. that last line. sigh. <3

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemarie πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  24. Ken Gierke says:

    That naivety of roses while seeking fulfillment is brilliant as a metaphor for your confidence at the end. When something is totally unexpected it certainly can take your breath away.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Ken πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  25. Dora says:

    A beautiful homage to love.

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  26. Great take on the prompt here! The power of love is breathtaking! <3

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Tricia πŸ˜€ so good to see you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  27. Helen says:

    Took my breath away …….

    1. Sanaa says:

      ❀️❀️❀️

  28. A sweetly beautiful love poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sascha πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it πŸ’„β€οΈ

  29. I’d taken breathing for granted
    until the day, – For me, you have captured that feeling of first being in love with these words.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Alicia πŸ˜€ so glad the poem resonated with you πŸ’„β€οΈ

  30. Sara McNulty says:

    β€œI take breathing for granted… until you take my breath away.”

    Stunning poem, Sanaa

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it πŸ’„β€οΈ

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