An unfinished poem lies in the lines of his palm

“If I am worth anything later, I am worth something now. For wheat is wheat, even if people think it is a grass in the beginning.” – Vincent Van Gogh

An unfinished poem lies in the lines of his palm;
earthy and ambiguous
it frequently invokes the muse which like the river is otherwise brimming,
emerald blue rippling,
indomitable with a hope to induce— there is no denying it,
his essence is that of wheat,
of fields laden with eternity in each turn of the breeze.
The sweet, rich brown
a breathless possibility that he might be “he,” is heavenly.
But oh! Blackness encircles like the arms of a cypress tree,
just as dark days are inevitable, they are necessary—
mournful pebbles pry
and I clutch my heart,
he’s the song I sing when everything seems to be falling apart.
Subtly pink, his lips put the sunrise to shame,
without touching
he beckons the soul and moves in as silently as a blown kiss;
and I lie here
envisioning him under a different sky during the early hours of night—
at a point where edges are blurred by infinite longing,

I inveigle sleep and sigh; “for wheat is wheat.”

 

 

Photo credits:  Vincent Van Gogh, Wheat Field with Cypresses

Posted for Poetics: Waiting on Wheat @ dVerse Poets Pub

https://dversepoets.com/2020/08/25/poetics-waiting-on-wheat/

22 Responses

  1. Grace says:

    I specially love this line:
    The sweet, rich brown
    a breathless possibility that he might be “he,” is heavenly.

    The waiting seems agonizing but worth the wait, I believe.

  2. Bev says:

    “fields laden with eternity with each turn of the breeze” … magical use of words!

  3. msjadeli says:

    I love the photo, the quote you chose, and how you revived the artistry of the man with your poem. Such a lovely tribute, Sanaa.

  4. Oh Sanaa this is so touching. Beautiful lines! I particularly loved
    “….there is no denying it,
    his essence is that of wheat,
    of fields laden with eternity in each turn of the breeze.”
    Well done!

  5. Your title/opening line is so tantalising, Sanaa. I especially love the lines:
    ‘his essence is that of wheat,
    of fields laden with eternity in each turn of the breeze.
    The sweet, rich brown
    a breathless possibility that he might be “he,” is heavenly’,
    the play on breeze and breath, and the way you incorporated words from the van Gogh quotation.

  6. Oh. That conclusion felt like all the wait is worth it. Your title is so so so true, too! Love this, Sanaa!

  7. Jenna says:

    This is absolutely beautiful! One of my favorite lines is, “he’s the song I sing when everything seems to be falling apart”

  8. Lillian says:

    I always find myself sighing at your words, Sanaa….this time I revel in the Van Gogh painting you’ve chosen and in his words as well!
    I have always adored Van Gogh’s work! One of my favorite artists.

  9. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    This is so wonderful… and all that anticipation makes the waiting worth it.

  10. Subtly pink, his lips put the sunrise to shame,
    without touching
    he beckons the soul and moves in as silently as a blown kiss;
    and I lie here

    A very sweet feeling here….

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