Repeatedly, a kiss then becomes rain

Here I am in the midst of it all,
not even a blue-black cloud and yet your mist is written
all over me–
the lit fuse of your lips soft and sensual
beckons, come take me down
and I realize
you are the only possible remedy for my parched landscape.
I am powerless,
for the moment I open my mouth,
the moment I attempt to speak, I am hushedโ€”

the earnestness of your chiseled features is enough to bowl me over.

A floating sensation; unexplained
I find I am unable to think clearly until daylight
shapes your face,
perhaps this is the new normal
the lipstick upon my coffee cup belittles me for delaying too muchโ€”
how long must a confession be?
I ask the heat of the sun most precariously.
โ€œAs long as it takes for the fume of his sighs to meld with yours
completely.โ€

 

 

 

Photo credits: Pinterest

Day Nineteen ~ Get Listed

Word List: Sensual, features, blue, mouth

Skylover Wordlist: Beckon ๐Ÿ’

Posted for “Get Listed: Poems in April Edition” @ Real Toadsย 

Posted on the Writers’ Pantry @ Poets and Storytellers United

42 Responses

  1. Old Egg says:

    Love is all about melding with your partner so in the end a look or even a glance ties the two of you together. What a beautful poem this is Sanaa.

  2. Ahhh! And that’s a rapturous sigh from over here, just contemplating these lovely words and soulful images.

  3. Youโ€™ve infused so much passion into this poem, Sanaa, it almost melts! I particularly love the lines:
    โ€˜not even a blue-black cloud and yet your mist is written
    all over meโ€™;
    โ€˜you are the only possible remedy for my parched landscapeโ€™;
    and
    โ€˜the lipstick upon my coffee cup belittles me for delaying too muchโ€™.

    • Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim ๐Ÿ˜€ it’s actually a birthday gift for someone special, so I decided to go all out! ๐Ÿ’„โค๏ธ

  4. Kerry says:

    This is a hot and sensual write, Sanaa! Love it!

  5. Wow, such passion – and truth. Excellently done.

  6. The last two lines left my heart full of sighs and knowings. Such a gloriously Sanaa poem, this one!

  7. Ellecee says:

    This is very romantic, sensual, and beautiful, a perfect gift for your friend๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒนโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ™

  8. This is gorgeous Sanaa as is love! So many lovely lines!!

  9. Rommy says:

    Oh the headiness of loving so passionately!

  10. Beautifully sensual Sanaa. The last 4 lines are stunning.

  11. Oh, so beautiful, Sanaa. “How long must a confession be?” Aching.

  12. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    So much longing in this poem… I do wonder if it will come to fruition.

  13. Beautiful and sensual…Love your ending

  14. gillena says:

    So full of romantic passion.
    “you are the only possible remedy for my parched landscape.”

    Happy Sunday, thanks for dropping by my sumie Sunday today

    Much๐Ÿ’›love

  15. So much said through your lips. I think your poems have been fired in a kiln.

  16. Oh, Sanaa. You’ve done it again. This is another example of what I call your soft sensuality. A kiss that becomes the rain.

  17. Wendy Bourke says:

    Passion put to words. THIS IS POETRY!

  18. Vandana Sharma says:

    The april heat rises further with this sensuous poem!!!!

  19. Helen says:

    Your poems spring from a magic place, sensuous and deep.

  20. Two sighs becoming one sounds just about perfect to me.

  21. Barry says:

    Oh my. So very sensual. Lovely.

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