The Weather Of The Heart

There are some who adore the dazzling
sun, a time when beard-tongue and lily
have just opened.

Not me.

My love’s for winter when theΒ trees are
clothed in pearly white, sigh when rosy
cheeked we huddle close together and
pull woolen hats over our ears.

The pewter sky, feral wind and singular
desire of knowing describe the weather
of the heart.

There is beauty in life and all its seasons
must we affiliate sorrow, conflict and
feeling?

I drank in loneliness and droplets of rain
grateful for time and clearer perspective;
for winter though austere, taught me joy
needs only finding.

 

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54 Responses

  1. paul scribbles says:

    Well I figured you might take us to the heart of the matter Sanaa and I was not disappointed. A clever metaphoric exploration. I agree that austerity can help us with our gratitude..

  2. Yes, “joy” waits for us. Allows us to dally. When you are ready it is there.

  3. Lovely! I especially enjoyed your first three stanzas — vivid, opposite, and each given its due.

  4. “joy needs only finding”. How lovely. I so like the pewter sky, the feral wind, the weather of the heart. A wonderful response to the prompt.

  5. Ellecee says:

    “The pewter sky”. I love this image and the last line “taught me joy needs only finding”. So true,,

  6. Bjorn says:

    I love the contrasts of weather and I crave winter just as much as summer…

  7. Yes, with Sherry I loved the pewter sky and the feral wind. I think my love’s for winter too.

  8. This is stunning chilly imagery, Sanaa, and romantic in the huddling close together. I agree, I too enjoy pewter skies and feral winds.

  9. gillena says:

    Luv the fact that you can appreciate and be schooled in soul lessons in every Season

    MUCH LOVE…

  10. There is so much in this to love. And I do.

  11. Timoteo says:

    I love the title…the weather of the heart is always changing πŸ™‚

  12. Winter can be wild and this is my favourite part- The pewter sky, feral wind and singular
    desire of knowing describe the weather of the heart. The wind can be feral…at school when it is windy the kids can be feral…

  13. I go for the winter πŸ˜€ Though, the winter is almost gone here but there are occasional showers with hailstorms. “joy needs only finding” – so true!

  14. waltermarks says:

    I like this reference to Winter ‘s heart weather. I’m more of a Spring. I like to see hope blossoming, opening wide with possibilities

  15. Grace says:

    Among the seasons, winter is my least favorite ha ~ Love the metaphor of the season weaving throughout ~

  16. Vivian Zems says:

    This is your usual eloquent self. Yes, we can appreciate finding joy after a period of famine or poverty of spirit. Good one!

  17. Jim says:

    Very nice reading, Sanaa. And joy often is found in winter.
    Some like the .summer sun, it makes things grow. Other stoic beings like their white chilling snow,
    I’ll take spring where the brown turns green
    And the green becomes greener. Snow has gone.
    ..

  18. Xenia Tran says:

    A beautiful write Sanaa, I love the warmth found in Winter too πŸ’œ

  19. Beautiful poem, beautiful ideas and realisations; I completely appreciate what you say … and I still hate the cold! πŸ˜€

  20. Sabio Lantz says:

    the ending phrase of “I drank in loneliness” was perfect!

  21. kaykuala says:

    for winter though austere, taught me joy
    needs only finding.

    Perfect ending Sanaa! One misses out the fun if the eyes remain closed!

    Hank

  22. I loved that last stanza! Very beautiful poem.

  23. Sara McNulty says:

    ‘Joy only needs finding’ – a hopeful, happy way to live. Love this, Sanaa

  24. D.Avery says:

    Yes. I agree, winter is to be valued for the time and space it provides us.

  25. Anita says:

    When we are alone, we can reflect.
    Joy is to be found & may all succeed.

  26. lillian says:

    LOVE the image and love the post! I do believe I love all the seasons….each has a different feeling and taste to it πŸ™‚ Nicely done.

  27. Imelda says:

    Ah, I can only sigh when reading this. Love it.

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