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Posted for Quadrille 22 @ dVerse Poets Pub
and on Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses
Posted on ‘Tuesday Platform’ @ Real Toads
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44 Responses
Ah that child of moon know the many shapes of life and wonders at it’s hidden meanings.
Intriguing piece Sanaa.
Thank you for linking to Monday WRites this week
Much love…
My pleasure, Gillena ❤️
Much love…
Oh, the pain… sometimes scars are wonderful to have… love it
Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Bjorn 🙂
I love those silhouette scars and wounds burning ‘a pale calyx of rose’!
Thank you so much, Kim ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
Beautiful! This is comforting, peaceful, even. A reminder that scars are a beautiful part of who we are.
Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Kay 🙂
I like your opening, comparing scars to the marks on the moon. That’s a lovely image and idea.
Thank you so much, Mary ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Ohhhh…scars as silhouettes…now that is lovely.
Thank you so much, De ❤️ so good to see you 😀
Beautifully done. Love the image of the rose at the end….those thorns on the rose can leave a scar in themselves.
Thank you so much, Lillian ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
I liked the idea of scars being silhouetted by the moon.
Thank you so much, Frank 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Lovely, as usual. 🙂
Thank you so much, Linda ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
I like how you structured this poem. Well done.
Thank you kindly, Maria ❤️
I like the structure of your words…the reader can feel the angst of the scars.
Thank you so much, Truedessa ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Exquisite!
Thank you so much, Rosemary ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀
Beautiful poem and photograph!
Thank you kindly, Bryan 🙂
Beautifully done Sanaa, I love the ‘silhouette beneath the gleam’ of the moon.
Thank you so much, Xenia ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Lovely piece!
Thank you kindly, Annell❤️
felt scars were but silhouette
beneath its gleam
One can picture the network of lines dispersed within its shiny beams. Very true Sanaa!
Hank
Thank you so much, Hank 🙂 so glad you liked it❤️
Compared to the moon the scars seem to shrink a bit into relation. A beautifully woven piece
Thank you so much, Tradlos 🙂 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Scars are the marks of the warrior who survives.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Toni ❤️
Such a dance of imagery… and truth. The way the scars aren’t ruling her life but remain part of who she is, still there… under the shine.
I really like the structure.
Thank you so much, Magaly 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
scars were but silhouettes… nice!
Thank you so much, Rajani 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
A lot of pain and passion in this poem. Lovely!
Thank you so much, Cressdia 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
This poem wells up with love and hurt. We need our scars to show that we lived.
Thank you so much, Sara 🙂 so good to see you ❤️