At length these thoughts whirled round inside the brain; with drops of rain caressing the window pane. Haunting – these outer precincts which don shades of bliss; as though to capture moments lost in time. What secrets lie amid the chaos and confusion; so dark and muffled upon these rooftops. I squint past obscure to touch and sense; allowing shock and change to keep me sane.
Streetlights burn with hope,
as rain pelts down on doubt
dawn of a new beginning.
(Day 29 of NaPoWriMo.)
Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads
I did not expect such a rainy picture from you… love the argent in those drops though.
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Wonderful shot and great thoughts too.
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I love your rooftop thoughts, Sanaa, I like rooftops, rooftop views, and rooftop writings. Yours makes me want to come see.
Some of my pictures have rooftops, mostly the other blog. But a ‘search doesn’t do justice. My favorite was from Bordeaux, France, hotel room.
BTW, you have a pretty skyline but I don’t recognize it. Thank you, lovely picture too.
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This is an amazing picture of light and dark – the security of being indoors on a rainy day.
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I’ve always loved the rain. These words really struck me “Haunting – these outer precincts which don shades of bliss” – they read like a prose poem introducing the tone of your short poem. There is beauty in that rain, and in your short poem – hopefully the sun will soon shine through the sadness. Thanks for sharing.
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Enjoyed this so much, there is something about a rainy day that makes us pensive,,,
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This was beautiful and complex. Great job,
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Soon we will b e having rain, but for today, it dry crisp and hot
Thanks for dropping by my blog today Sanaa
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What a BEAUTIFUL photo! Is that window a view from your office? A very lovely poem, as well.
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I love your rainy day view and words!!
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A little colour and a little blurring rain worked into a beautiful, reflective paradox.
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I adore the way rain changes a window, and the sights beyond. Gorgeous photo, and a great piece.
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Lovely rainy photo – and lovely rainy writing.
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Haunting picture well captured in words 🙂
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Such an emotive write, Sanaa!
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Such a creative way to describe the view from your window. Beautiful
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“don shades of bliss” … different levels of happiness… as well as sadness.
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lovely haibun Sanaa, i particularly luv the use of ‘dawn’ in your haiku
I’m happy you linked up to Monday WRites today
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