I love the “ash” inside “wash” … the painted lips (what a gorgeous picture) … the “b” and the “p” in the second appearance of “p(aint)” at the end with the extra white space around them (it turns into blood-pressure, for me … So full control over one’s blood-pressure speaks to meditating and making healthy choices to overcome unhealthy desires. That’s what I take away from this piece.
Terrific sensual imaginative Jambing; fun & stirring using several forms of enjambment, keeping us hopping along with the unique rhythm of the piece. I like the lines /ad-just with thorns/the fear-less ones/the world ad-orns/.
What a gorgeous visual, coupled with your piece. I love all the space and movement you’ve created here, and the double verb in blooms/looms (I have never noticed that one before – it ROCKS!)
Also love the negation of the verb “paint” simply by setting off “aint.” And that “just with thorns.” Just wonderful.
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This is excellent.
I love the “ash” inside “wash” … the painted lips (what a gorgeous picture) … the “b” and the “p” in the second appearance of “p(aint)” at the end with the extra white space around them (it turns into blood-pressure, for me … So full control over one’s blood-pressure speaks to meditating and making healthy choices to overcome unhealthy desires. That’s what I take away from this piece.
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Terrific sensual imaginative Jambing; fun & stirring using several forms of enjambment, keeping us hopping along with the unique rhythm of the piece. I like the lines /ad-just with thorns/the fear-less ones/the world ad-orns/.
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What a gorgeous visual, coupled with your piece. I love all the space and movement you’ve created here, and the double verb in blooms/looms (I have never noticed that one before – it ROCKS!)
Also love the negation of the verb “paint” simply by setting off “aint.” And that “just with thorns.” Just wonderful.
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I like the giving in to desire, specially with b(looms) and p(aint) ~ Stunning visual as well Sanaa (my alter ego loves it) ~
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Desire now
all that
can be
be can
that all
now Desire..:)
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Well done, Sanaa. You worked your words and their arrangement well. I like the idea of desire painting your mind and soul!
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Wonderful arrangement of words, and use of enjambment is well done. There is a really nice flow to it. 🙂
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Nice use of enjambment.
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This is excellent… No pain in that paint. – a kiss like this – and a confidence growing in togetherness.
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Refreshingly pro-world, pro-senses, pro-pleasure.
Great picture to go with the indulgent words
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This is a journey of surprising meanings. Delightful!
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“The fearless ones the world adorns”; ah yes passionate love needs that leap of risk; luv this daring little write
Thank you for linking up at Monday WRites Sanaa
much love…
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the fear-less ones / the world ad-orns
quite like how you split this up, Sanaa ~
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