Orange peel and smoke

Desire begins quietly:

like the smell of oranges after rain,
like a window left open in winter,
like something nameless pacing just outside the light.

Desire is:

a match struck under the tongue,
a glass of wine left breathing in the dark,
a hand hovering over a bruise,

the slow untying of gloves,
a wolf circling the same patch of snow,
perfume trapped inside an old coat,

a locked room with music behind it,
a train heard at midnight from miles away,
salt drying on bitten lips,

smoke curling from an unread letter,
the moon lowering itself into black water,
a knife polished until it reflects your face,

the moment before thunder admits itself,
the ache in a violin string before the bow,
a hunger elegant enough to call itself devotion.

And afterward—

the room still breathing around you,
candles collapsed into their own wax,
a single glove abandoned on the floor,
the window fogged with vanished mouths,
your name tasting different in your own mouth,
like something stolen gently from the dark.

 

 

 

Photo credits: Still life orange by Elena Katsyura, Pinterest

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6 Responses

  1. Helen says:

    Your list is one that readers are going to want to commit to memory ~~~ I already have. Cheers, Sanaa.

  2. Ken Gierke says:

    This desire, in itself, is almost enough to satisfy.

  3. Such wonderful imagery. Sigh. 💙
    I especially liked
    “the moment before thunder admits itself,
    the ache in a violin string before the bow,”

    The glove made me think of Bridgerton. 😊

  4. kaykuala h says:

    your name tasting different in your own mouth,
    like something stolen gently from the dark.

    Not just a satisfaction and a relief but more of being able to declare a triumph
    from the regular inconveniences. Grand close Sanaa!

    Hank

  5. Gillena Cox says:

    Luv this list poem, Sanaa

    Much love

  6. Stunning images, Sanaa. What an incredibly original and beautiful poem!!!!!

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