Waterfall

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Lo! The sight,
So utterly majestic!
A cascade of water,
Allegedly artistic!

Hear thy breath,
Whisper in the air.
Water gushing slowly,
Propelling thee to stare.

Alas! The water,
Shimmering coral blue.
Painting up thy cheeks,
A soft crimson hue.

Basking there despite,
The hour of twilight.
Its time to bid adieu.
Walk the woods through.

Lo! The sight,
So utterly majestic!
A cascade of water,
AllegedlyΒ artistic!

 

Photo Credits:Β Giphy

Posted for Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

Comments

  1. Roshan Ara says:

    Wow! Beautiful use of imagery in the poem! I love the picture too! πŸ˜€

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Roshan,

      Thank you! Highly appreciated πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  2. L. Moon says:

    Sanaa
    you give the water a beautiful voice as she rushes toward spring. Glorious!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Leslie,

      Why thank you dear! Highly appreciated πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  3. I am always mesmerized by the sight and sound of waterfalls and now by your poem….

    ‘Hear thy breath,
    Whisper in the air.
    Water gushing slowly,
    Propelling thee,
    To stare.’

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Donna,

      So nice of you to stop by! πŸ˜€
      Thank you so much!
      Highly appreciated!

      xoxo

  4. Grace says:

    Indeed a sight to behold ~ Thanks for sharing ~

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Grace,

      Thank you so much! Highly appreciated πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  5. Mary says:

    Indeed waterfalls are both majestic and artistic. I enjoyed your form as well as your picture.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hi Mary,

      So glad you stopped by! Thank you so much dear πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated! πŸ™‚

  6. This is such a beautiful poem, so appropriate for Love Water Day. I love the cascading waterfall image too. Just lovely. And thank you for your wonderful comment on my wild woman poem!!!! So happy to meet you.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hi Sherry,

      Awww thank you so much! Yes I loved your poem! You’re most welcome my dear πŸ™‚
      Very happy to meet you as well πŸ˜€

  7. Beautiful presentation πŸ™‚

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Sir,

      Thank you! Highly appreciated! πŸ˜€

  8. Poppy says:

    There is so much energy in a waterfall, and you have captured it well.

    Poppy

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Poppy,

      Thank you! Glad you liked it dear πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  9. A waterfall can really captivate.. just sitting there looking is a bliss.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Sir!

      Glad you liked it so much. Highly appreciate your kind words πŸ˜€

  10. Peggy says:

    wonderful imagery in the poem and the photo is neat as well.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Peggy,

      Thank you πŸ˜€ Highly appreciate your kind words.
      Thanks for stopping by πŸ™‚

      xoxo

  11. totomai says:

    the sound of flowing water is therapeutic as does the message of your poem.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Totomai,

      Glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated!

      xoxo

  12. Beautiful picture & poem! I love waterfalls. Your writing has rhythm & movement just like the liveliness of the waterfall πŸ™‚

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Loredana,

      So nice of you to stop by! Highly appreciate your warmth and kindness.
      Glad you liked it! πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  13. Tatius says:

    Great images you paint with your words. Great write!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Tatius,

      Glad you liked it! Highly appreciated! πŸ˜€
      Thank you for stopping by πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  14. Sumana Roy says:

    Love your beautiful words full of wonder like the waterfalls itself…

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Sumana,

      Thank you so much dear πŸ˜€ Glad you liked it.
      Highly appreciated!

      xoxo

  15. Torie says:

    Really wonderful imagery here! Very nice πŸ™‚ Love the waterfall picture as well!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Torie,

      Thank you for stopping by πŸ˜€
      Glad you liked it dear!

      xoxo

  16. jae Rose says:

    If it’s beautiful it’s beautiful…art is subjective..and whatever lifts the spirits must be artful

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Jae Rose,

      Im so glad you liked it!
      Highly appreciate your kind words πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  17. Myrna says:

    One of my favorite places on earth is by a waterfall I try to visit at least once a year. Your poem made me feel like I was there. Beautiful.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Myrna,

      That sounds wonderful πŸ˜€ Glad you liked it dear.
      Highly appreciate your kindness.

      xoxo

  18. humbird says:

    Oh, the water, esp. the waterfall is always so refreshing, moving and really makes us stare… Happy Spring!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Humbird,

      Thank you so much! πŸ˜€ So glad you liked it.

      Happy Spring!
      xoxo

  19. Suyash_J says:

    yes artistic indeed

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Suyash,

      Thank you so much! Highly appreciated. πŸ™‚

  20. Sanaa,

    The image enhances your very fitting words. I love waterfalls as they are powerfully inspiring. Water is a great prompt for all poetic forms of writing…

    Eileen

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Eileen,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciate your kind remarks.

      xoxo

  21. gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!

    β™₯

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello there,

      Thank you so much πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated.

      xoxo

  22. kelvin s.m. says:

    Hi Sanaa… Lovely mix of classical & modern language in your poem. I have looked further at your ‘Thys’ & ‘Thees’.. your ‘thys’ were rightly used, however, I prefer ‘thou’ over your ‘thees’ in this particular piece. But, the entire poem itself reads beautifully executed. Thanks for the poem!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Kelvin,

      Thank you so much for stopping by πŸ˜€
      Glad you liked it! Highly appreciated.

  23. G L Meisner says:

    A very exciting piece, not the soft smooth one expects. Great choice.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Mr Meisner,

      Thank you so much! Highly appreciated! πŸ˜€

  24. CC says:

    You have captured well the majestic nature of the waterfall in all its glorious beauty. Absolutely lovely prose and photo/video to accompany it.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello CC,

      Thanks for stopping by πŸ˜€ Glad you liked it dear.
      Highly appreciated! πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  25. Aqsa Sid Sara says:

    Beautiful <3 <3

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hi Aqsa,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated πŸ™‚
      xoxo

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