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Form: Shape Poetry
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Photo credits: flickrhivemind.net
Form: Shape Poetry
68 Responses
I love the words hanging down the page like its floating in the dust ~ I would love to travel as if the oceans had no boundaries ~
Thanks for participating Sanaa & wishing you happy week ~
Hello Grace,
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Your poem dances like a will-o-wisp travelling here and there on a whim.
Hello Suzanne,
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I found myself enjoying wandering through the wandering words of your poem. Enjoyed your technique, Sanaa!
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Wonderful!!!!!!!
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I love your dance, it is beautiful and boundless
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So, lovely and beautiful~ I, too felt my mind, wander and float with your guided hand~
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What a fun, flitty, jaunty travel poem! As if oceans had no boundaries what an incredible thought.
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That’s a lovely shape poem Sanaa…enjoy your travels.
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This is really creative and fun…love those dangling words that continue our journey down the page reading your words.
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I like the feel of this, the look of it….I think you’ve accomplished that open-ended freedom feel of travel by the way you’ve placed the words on the page. Beautiful. Fresh. Lovely.
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The world’s an oyster… what a wonderful springboard.
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Love to walk these paths again… wonderful
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A spiral
flow knows
feels no sidewalks
of dance.. oh.. to
stream a river
ocean
nows
living
whole..
galaxies
Universe feat us..:)
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Nicely set Sanaa! The unique way presented created a show of movement along the way. It very much tallied with the travel mode!
Hank
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Now that was an amazing form, captures the wanderlust spirit very well. Great write Sanaa!
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Creative shape, Sanaa…your poem weaves and flows with travel fever/wanderlust…and takes your reader along for the trip!
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beautiful, hopeful and youthful
gracias for sharing the spirit of your heart and soul
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I love your words but am very impressed as to how you have made them shape the page. Some hints please!
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I love how you opened this poem with the visual artistry and word….beckoning us to breathe along with you. An amazing journey moving down the words.
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great shape poem, love how the letters and words really “wander”. like the tone of the poem too.
and oh yes, great photo! 😉
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I love the shape of this wonderful poem – like a dance and the very best of dreams…beautiful and joyful as always
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Visiting again – smiles! I do like the way you are so very open to experimentation with poetry. This is a delightful read.
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I love the way you have presented your words; my eyes go all over the page. It gives it such a scenic quality, much like the verse. 🙂
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You’ve done this beautifully. The shape enhances the sense.
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Beautiful! What fun you had with the words! Cheers! 🙂
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Wow! I love the form of the poem and the words are equally beautiful.
A delightful Sunday read 🙂
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Masterpiece!
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I like the shape of your poem and the movement of your words…strategically placed to take the reader with you…light and breezy..
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Luv this shaped poem Sanaa, and the words are so commanding, one wants to wander along with your persona here.
Have a lovely Sunday, I’m happy you dropped in at my Sunday Lime
much love…
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I loved the dancing words…they have accentuated your poem making it more meaningful… 🙂
Very nicely penned… 🙂
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How delightfully inventive this form was to beautifully illustrate your poem with feelings you no doubt you share yourself!
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A joyful cascade of words … LIBERATING!
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I love the shape of this, the words, the meaning, the rhymes. It’s beautiful.
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Such a cool style!
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