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I fear not scorching heat of sun,
it’s similar to passion in my blood.
Heart hums along with raging sea
as though longing to test credence,
Come tread on hazy swamps with me
feel hope emerge from chasm deep —
irk not your soul for what’s to come
cause future my darling’s not inked
in stone.

 

 

Photo credits: Incredible Snaps

Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

For my prompt “Tomorrow when the sun will rise, who knows what the tide
could bring – One Year Celebration on 6th January at 8:00 am EDT.

Posted for poems written on Prompt Nights 

& Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

Comments

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Rajani ❤️

  1. Sumana Roy says:

    “feel hope emerge from chasm deep —” another inspiring line Sanaa…beautiful…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sumana 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  2. Susan says:

    How wonderful to learn of human resistance in sync with nature. I will always hope, dear poet.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susan 🙂 as ever for inspiring us ❤️

  3. Such wise words, Sanaa. Beautiful poem 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Purba 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  4. True, the future is not inked in stone….we are wise to keep that in mind. Smiles.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  5. Very optimistic ending; lovely. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  6. Old Egg says:

    It is up to us like Alexander the Great to cut that Gordian knot of the future ourselves.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Robin 🙂

  7. Jae Rose says:

    For some reason I love the idea of treading through hazy swamps – such a unique image 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jae 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  8. Wonderful! The refusal to despair is so vital!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Most definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Rosemary 😀

  9. Janice says:

    A beautiful poem. The future not being inked in stone feels like an echo of recent thoughts.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Janice 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  10. Old Egg says:

    What great advice there is in this poem Sanaa especially in matters of the heart where boldness and resolve are so important…and tenderness helps as well!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

  11. If we burn as hot as fire, flames can burn us not. Love this thought. And I adore the idea that the future is not a solid thing. Our actions shape tomorrow.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Most definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Magaly 😀

  12. Ellecee says:

    I like this very much, the courage to feel the heat, the knowing that things can change, pushing through,, 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  13. Love this vision, Sanaa. It’s true “future is not inked in stone.” But hopefully our actions can help shape the future we want. Brilliant write!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Most definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Khaya 😀

  14. Rommy says:

    This is passionate and sweet at the same time. It’s a delight to read.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rommy ❤️ so glad you liked it 😀

  15. Sand says:

    This is lovely, Sanaa. I especially like the last line — future’s not inked in stone. A beautiful way to look at the future.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sandra 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  16. Vandana Sharma says:

    Yes, very true future is unpredictable so lets just think about hope 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Vandana ❤️

  17. gillena says:

    Luv the fearlessness in the cognizance of your internal passion

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

      much love…

  18. Miranda says:

    The future is NOT inked in stone… Something which we should all keep in mind.
    Thanks, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Miranda ❤️

  19. …and even if it was inked, we would find a way to rewrite it better. I really like this, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  20. Thotpurge says:

    hazy swamps… like that image..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

  21. Especially these turbulent days, tomorrow is not a given. I love “feel hope emerge from chasm deep” so much!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  22. Chris Evans says:

    This is beautiful! Love the image of heart as it “hums along with raging sea as though longing to test credence.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Chris 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  23. My favourite line – “Come tread on hazy swamps with me”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Laura 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  24. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Love that last line.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

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