July 2, 2017 | 43 Comments Photo credits:Β Pixabay I chose to contemplate ‘Words count with Mama Zen,’ January 2015. Posted for “Play it again Toads” @ Real Toads & Posted on the Poetry Pantry @ Poets UnitedΒ
I like the way the words seem to drip down the page, and how you combined the hunger for food with the need to write poetry . Reply
How your poem demonstrates the interconnection of all things on our lives, as words are food for poets and music to the eyes and ears of readers. Reply
I hunger for words to summon an unsullied smile Where emotions intrude between loved ones one is at a loss for words. It is naturally the truth, Sanaa! Agreed! Hank Reply
Oh, that sweet (and sometimes ravenous) longing for that which we wish we could make ours–right now, a cup of coffee and a cinnamon bun would make me the happiest of souls. Reply
Oh my Sanaa! Your words are so beautiful. I could dream to them all day! You are very gifted, thanks for sharing this with us! Reply
Wish i could lay out my words like you do here.
Awwww!β€οΈ Thank you so much, Angie π so glad you liked it!β€οΈ
Some days the words simply don’t come…
But I think they came for you.
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I like the way the words seem to drip down the page, and how you combined the hunger for food with the need to write poetry .
Thank you so much, Kerry π so glad you enjoyed it β€οΈ
This one does bring that smile. Spot on.
Thank you so much, Sumana π so good to see you β€οΈ
How your poem demonstrates the interconnection of all things on our lives, as words are food for poets and music to the eyes and ears of readers.
Thank you so much, Robin π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
I hunger for words to
summon an unsullied smile
Where emotions intrude between loved ones one is at a loss for words. It is naturally the truth, Sanaa! Agreed!
Hank
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Oh, that sweet (and sometimes ravenous) longing for that which we wish we could make ours–right now, a cup of coffee and a cinnamon bun would make me the happiest of souls.
P.S. I’m tickled pink that we chose the same one. π
Thank you so much, Magaly π so glad you enjoyed it β€οΈ
Ah, I do feel the yearning in your words!
Thank you so much, Mary π so good to see you β€οΈ
I love the format of this poem. I really enjoyed it.
Thank you so much, Sherry π so glad you enjoyed it β€οΈ
A lovely write.
Thank you so much, Annell π so good to see you β€οΈ
Beautiful poetry.
Thank you so much, Julian π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
You describe well what we all experience — that hunger for words. Well done!
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Oh my Sanaa! Your words are so beautiful. I could dream to them all day! You are very gifted, thanks for sharing this with us!
Awww!β€οΈ Thank you so much, James π so glad you liked it!β€οΈ
A beautiful beat of a soul in the moonlight
Thank you so much, Martin π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
So much in this to give one pause … and savor. Beautiful!
Thank you so much, Wendy π so glad you enjoyed it β€οΈ
Yes, that single smile.
Elizabeth
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A familiar hunger!
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What a delicious piece π
Thank you so much, Jae π so good to see you β€οΈ
You made me smile. This is lovely!
Thank you so much, Ayala π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
The words will not be assuaged by treats!! Oh I so get this. xo
Thank you so much, Marian π so glad you liked it β€οΈ
I share your hunger for words. It’s never satisfied…
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