To the Sun

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The windows of thy soul,
Thrown wide open,
To the Sun.

Pray do not fancy,
This for a Pun!

The Sun hath rays,
Bright and warm,
Risen in the East,
Such is thy norm.

Flip thy hair,
Giveth a spun.
Smile while ye sparkle,
Bright in the Sun.

The windows of thy Soul,
Thrown wide open,
To the Sun.

Pray do not fancy,
This for a Pun!

 

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Posted for Midweek Motif @ Poets United

Comments

  1. Jae Rose says:

    Spinning and sparkling in the sun really does sound quite fun!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Jaerose,

      So glad you liked it! Lol yeah it is!
      xoxo

  2. Alia Khan says:

    So inspiring!
    Xoxo

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Alia,

      Thank you! Appreciated.
      xoxo

  3. humbird says:

    Sounds like song! I love the picture too 🙂

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Humbird,

      Thank you so much! Yes its lyrical poetry. Glad you liked it.
      xoxo

  4. Susan says:

    It’s good as well as fun to give the soul a sun bath at times. You gave this poem a very convincing sparkle. YAY!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Susan,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. Lol yeah I agree! Yayyyy 😀
      xoxo

  5. Enchanting, like a poem from one of the old masters!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Glad you liked it! Yes my poems are inspired from Old poets.. just love them!
      xoxo

  6. I love the open heart chakra feeling that this portion brings,

    “The windows of thy Soul,
    Thrown wide open,
    To the Sun.”

    Beautifully expanding!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Hannah,

      Thank you so much dear! Yes I simply love expressing through poetry!
      Highly appreciated.
      xoxo

  7. Old Egg says:

    Perhaps it was not so long ago that mankind in their wisdom worshiped the sun for the obvious benefits it bestowed on them. But foolishly we wanted more and now look where we are. How right you are to say “Smile while ye sparkle”.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      So kind of you to stop by! Glad you liked my work!
      Highly Appreciated!

      xoxo

  8. Sumana Roy says:

    love your language with a prayer like flavor and also the beautiful brightness…

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Sumana,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
      xoxo

  9. panchali says:

    Enchanting..That golden orb can actually create the magic…lovely write!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Panchali,

      Thank you so much!Glad you liked it!
      xoxo

  10. claudia says:

    so much warmth in this… the sun def. sprinkles some magic on us…

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Claudia,

      So kind of you dear!
      Highly appreciated!

      xoxo

  11. Grace says:

    Nice ~ I specially admire this part:

    The windows of thy Soul,
    Thrown wide open,
    To the Sun.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Grace,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.
      xoxo

  12. totomai says:

    a song for the sun. keep shining, keep spinning 🙂

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Totomai,

      So nice of you to stop by! Thank you so much for your kind words!
      Highly appreciated.
      xoxo

  13. Absolutely love the positive rays in this poem. Filled with a thanksgiving and delight…

    Eileen

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Eileen,

      Thank you so much for your kind words!
      Highly appreciated, thanks for stopping by!
      xoxo

  14. G L Meisner says:

    A fun light (no pun intended) poem. Very nice.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Mr Meisner,

      Glad you liked it! Highly appreciated.

  15. A fun to read piece. I’d like to be basking in some sun right now!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Jennifer,

      Glad you liked it! Highly appreciated.
      xoxo

  16. Myrna says:

    This poem was fun. I like the idea of opening up the windows of our souls, then spin in the sun. Light does us good. Enjoyed your poem.

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Hello Myrna,

      Thank you so much! Means alot to me. Glad you enjoyed reading my poem! 😀
      xoxo

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