To love would be sublime

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What is this feeling?
That beats inside this chest.
Each wish it seemed fulfilled
As if tongue had long expressed.

What is this yearning?
That throbs inside this chest.
Who would have thought?
Who could have guessed;
He picked me out from all the rest.

I sense the words are spilling;
Confined so long so deep within.
His passion loud as storm
to mine was found akin.

I feel the world is spinning;
Emotions growing strong.
Like buds in Spring have whispered
to lilies a fervent song.

I long to leave our footprints
Embedded in sands of time;
So that the world can thus announce,
To love would be sublime.

 

 

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Comments

  1. kaykuala h says:

    I long to leave our footprints
    Embedded in sands of time;

    Right ending Sanaa!. One strives to leave imprints of one’ presence so that it takes off for love to fulfill

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead

  2. Jamztoma says:

    This was very romantic. You are so lucky and your significant other is too. Happy Valentine’s Sanaa. I will be in later or tomorrow with mine.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello James,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      PS: Happy Valentine’s Day πŸ™‚

  3. Rall says:

    The quintessential love poem for Valentines Day. ! πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rall,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  4. Sumana Roy says:

    “He picked me out from all the rest.”…sweetly sweet…happy valentine’s day Sanaa πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sumana,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

      PS: Happy Valentine’s Day Sumana πŸ˜€

  5. adcitlali says:

    I love the image sands of time. It makes me think of memories that we recall as if written on sand, and changed over time.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Adcitlali,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  6. Jae Rose says:

    Sublime indeed – i really got swept along in the passion and the energy..it would be nice wouldn’t it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Jae Rose,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  7. Old Egg says:

    We do leave our footprints so lets hope they reflect the love we had. What a great read this is Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  8. Mary says:

    There is nothing like the feeling of love (especially for Valentines Day)!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  9. I think that’s the best thing about love, to pick and be picked “out out from all the rest”. β™₯

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Magaly,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  10. Oh how beautifully you have expressed love when it first bursts forth….and that closing stanza is a perfect summation of one’s feeling of the perfect love.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Donna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  11. debi says:

    Beautiful love song

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Debi,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  12. Kerry O'Connor says:

    Such a romantic write – perfect for the day.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  13. BjΓΆrn says:

    Heartbearingly warm.. Romance when it’s at its best.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  14. Beautiful, Sanaa….and the brown leggings in the photo are wicked-cool. My daughter and granddaughter both would love them!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  15. Sublime indeed! (And you always find such wonderful pictures to illustrate your words.)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  16. “Like buds in Spring have whispered
    to Lilies a fervent song.” I like that!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Jennifer,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  17. Tatius says:

    Nothing like receiving the same love you wish to give. Great write!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Tatius,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  18. Sanaa you are a true romantic! “Who could have guessed;
    He picked me out from all the rest.” – ah how well you capture the specialness of being loved

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Laura,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  19. dsnake1 says:

    what a beautiful love song. just the perfect thing for Valentine’s Day. πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Dsnake,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  20. humbird says:

    Beautiful poem, sublime love – up to us, how we can care and carry the feelings to others… ~ Much Love, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Humbird,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  21. My favorite line is: buds in Spring have whispered to Lilies a fervent song.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Colleen,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  22. Ankita Sethi says:

    Love is in the air…Beautiful song for this valentine! πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Ankita,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  23. Sanaa,

    Perfect sentiments expressed to match the day. A delightful St Valentine’s Day treat with romantic words..
    Eileen

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Eileen,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  24. barbara says:

    Such a sweet love poem! You can feel the excitement she is feeling for her newfound love, making everything around her take on her happiness! πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Barbara,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  25. Stacy Mar says:

    Simply gorgeous and full of feeling!

    You remind me of a young Emily Dickinson.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Stacy,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  26. ZQ says:

    Sweet and beautifully written.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello ZQ,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  27. Georgina says:

    To love is sublime and so special. You capture the emotions so well.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Georgina,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  28. Victoria says:

    And may this love endure throughout the years…even after the sublime feelings have cooled off!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Victoria,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  29. Sanaa, you took me with those closing lines…beautiful and so ardent!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sreeja,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead

  30. Locomente says:

    Heartfelt… Gives a warm feeling… πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Satya,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

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