Whipped cream can do so much more than complete;
from chocolate mousse
to romantic notions in books and films,
one can’t help but be drawn to its recipe,
come and observe,
sometimes, reading is nothing more, than a gentle
reminder to let the heart open itself up
to possibilities–
I love it when words touch another soul.
Whipped cream is a common figure of rhetoric;
simply dab on his cheek and wait for him
to respond,
is art of effective whisking which takes
only five minutes,
buckwheat shortcakes with earl-grey apricot
compote,
believe me when I say
it’s incumbent to find the perfect companion,
be it individual or dessert that beguiles the senses.
Whipped cream exercises a great charm over
her contemporaries,
greek yogurt hardly possesses the same,
to be honest,
perfect for when blooms converse beneath
the sun
or when estranged lovers meet–
so much better than butter and milk,
it envisages truth
and touches upon a world, invisible to
the naked eye,
whipped cream belongs only to moments.
The gates of the underworld remain closed;
I laud whipped cream
for spirits that wander in the wilderness
are afraid of taste,
heavenly, as a cloud topping of mascarpone,
it’s easier to give in
and admit to sinful indulgence,
I wonder as to how many of them have fled
at mere thought–
whipped cream is when one is afraid
they will say the unsaid, are you brave enough?
Photo credits: Strawberry and white cream on ceramic, unsplash
Kim is our lovely hostess on dVerse where she invites us to write poems
emulating the format of Les Murray’s poem. Come join us! ❤️
How charming this poem is. Love the whole language of the second stanza, starting with:Whipped cream is a common figure of rhetoric; Also this line plays to the senses totally: this whipped cream belongs only to moments.
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you enjoyed it! 💄❤️
Oh my goodness, Sanaa, you have me drooling over chocolate mousse with whipped cream! And it’s only a few hours until bedtime! I too love it when words touch another soul, and I love the idea that ‘whipped cream belongs only to moments’.
Thank you so much, my dearest Kim 😍 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
(and thank you for the glorious prompt) 🥂
“find the perfect companion,
be it individual or dessert that beguiles the senses”
And all that is left to be done is put the cherries on top.
Ooh la la liked this one, Sanaa, especially the challenge at the end.
Thank you so much, Lisa 😀 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
You whipped up an incredibly delicious write, rich in metaphors! Stunning, Sanaa. ❤️❤️
Thank you so much, Punam 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Oh wow, Sanaa…..you took the simplicity of whipped cream and made it…hmm, not so simple anymore. I especially love “it envisages truth and touches upon a world, invisible to the naked eye,
whipped cream belongs only to moments.”
Awww gosh! Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
Wonderful Sanaa. Cool Whip and Canned Whipped Cream don’t hold a candle to the real thing!
Thank you so much, Dwight 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
“Whipped cream exercises a great charm over
her contemporaries, ”
Very sensous issues are given to whipped cream.
Happy Tuesday with a topping of whipped cream😊
Much💚love
Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️
Much love back 🥂
Unique!!
Those buckwheat shortcakes with earl-grey apricot compote sound especially amazing.
Thank you so much, Melissa 😀 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
Sanaa, you really followed his style / form to a “T” … wow oh wow. I think, I think I am brave enough!
Thank you so much, Helen 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
I love how you brought so much more to whipped cream than just a garnish!
Thank you so much, Christine 😀 so glad the poem resonated with you 💄❤️
Funny enough, I actually can’t stand whipped cream, but I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem.
Thank you so much, JYP 😀 so good to see you 💄❤️
Ok, sounds like a challenge, Sanaa! So next time i might take whipped cream on my chai 😉
Thank you so much, Lynn 😀 so glad the poem and its imagery appealed to you 💄❤️
What a lovely tribute to whipped cream! Now I want some Earl Grey!
Yayyy! Thank you so much, Colleen 😀 so glad you enjoyed it 💄❤️
sensationally sensual Sanaa
Thank you so much, my dearest Laura 😀 so glad you liked it 💄❤️