Succubus

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Night curled round as silken sheets
as the wind blew forth fervid breath
I lay restless drowned deep in muse
reveling as her beauty sweet engulfs
Her kiss soothed not, nor calms pith
felt as though sky and sea both split
I gasped as her mouth dripping with
blood caressed her cheekbones wan!
“Fool art thou to has’t invited me in;
oh when morn dost come, I believe
love bites dust on All Hallow’s Eve”

 

 

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  1. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Oh this one bites.. I do love the ancient voice of your seducer here… most fitting for an ageless undead.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  2. Helen Dehner says:

    An All Hallow’s Eve poem for the ages ….

    1. Sanaa says:

      You bet ❀️ thanks for stopping by, Helen πŸ™‚

  3. Seduced and mocked. What a fate… I bet the victim of all that suffering is hungering for the release that will come with morning.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Oh definitely πŸ™‚ thank you so much, Magaly ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  4. sherry marr says:

    I like how love bites dust on All Hallows Eve.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry ❀️ good to see you πŸ˜€

  5. Rommy says:

    Very foolish indeed to play with a pitiless succubus. Gothically delightful Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rommy ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ˜€

  6. Mary says:

    Ewwwww, this makes my flesh crawl eerily on this Halloween Day!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Mary πŸ˜€ I was going for eeriness. Good to see you ❀️

  7. kaykuala h says:

    oh when morn dost come, I believe
    love bites dust on All Hallow’s Eve”

    The discovery only comes the next morning attested to with the numerous love-bites.

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by, Hank

  8. Thotpurge says:

    The spirit of Halloween… !!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Indeed ❀️ thank you kindly, Rajani πŸ™‚

  9. Sherry Marr says:

    Yoiks, that bleeding mouth! So vivid!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry πŸ˜‰ good to see you ❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely, thanks for stopping by Samyuktha πŸ™‚

  10. Your theme is on point!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Brother Ollie πŸ™‚

  11. Truedessa says:

    Love hurts, they say – eerie, but perfect for halloween

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Truedessa ❀️ so nice to see you πŸ˜€

  12. Myrna says:

    Beautifully sensual and scary. Love how you capture the spirit of Halloween.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Myrna ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ˜€

  13. ZQ says:

    Well Sanaa, you are def in the spirit ooooooooh πŸ™‚
    ZQ

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❀️ thanks for stopping by, ZQ πŸ™‚

  14. gillena says:

    A tale dark enough for a timely Halloween

    Thanks for dropping in at my Sunday Standard today Sanaa

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ˜€

  15. Wendy Bourke says:

    The gothic dialogue in this, is perfect for this All Hallow’s Eve tale. The drips of rhyme that fall, throughout, really confer a masterful “polish” to the piece … Wonderful writing!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Wendy ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ˜€

  16. Old Egg says:

    Perhaps not a good time to change your mind, but go out with a bang as it were.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by, Robin ❀️

  17. Oh, the muse or kali, giver and taker of life.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Interesting way to look at it, Colleen πŸ™‚ thank you kindly ❀️

  18. totomai says:

    I’ll be more careful with seduction. Haha. Chilling write Sanaa

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Totomai πŸ˜€ good to see you ❀️

  19. Kerry O'Connor says:

    love bites dust on All Hallow’s Eve… I love the conclusion to this dark depiction of emotion.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ˜€

  20. Lots to love in this sweet and dark seduction! Happy Halloween!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Audrey ❀️ Happy Halloween πŸ˜€

  21. Sara McNulty says:

    Sweetly dark and seductive, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara ❀️ so glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  22. Jim says:

    Very nice, Sanaa. But I am disappointed in that he didn’t succumb to the Vampire’s courting. I thought always those were irresistible. πŸ™‚
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Perhaps she was not his type πŸ˜‰ good to see you Jim ❀️

  23. Gina says:

    How bitter sweet is the prize for lust. Wonderful verse πŸ˜€ XXX

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gina πŸ˜€ so nice to see you ❀️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

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