Soul

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Hwa art thy soul?
Silhouetted by the kohl.

Much to thy discern,
Too bard to cajole!
Alas! as such,
Thy wandering soul.

Comparable much,
To sparkling gems.
Oscillating leaves,
Upon a stem.

Hwa art thy soul?
This much, shall I ask?
Not likely so much,
As a task!

Thy soul I presume,
Much brighter than fire!
Leading thy realm,
In hopes to inspire!

Alas! I shall deduce,
Leaving ye fellows,
With much to brood.

This journey is perpetual,
Nothing short,
Of incredible!

 

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Posted on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Yogesh says:

    Very inspiring…!!!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Thank you so much, Yogesh 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  2. Sarah Brown says:

    Your poetry is very unique unlike the contemporaries.
    Xoxo

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Thank you so much, Sarah 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  3. Richard says:

    Your poems are so different! Must be in your genes as this requires major talent!

    1. sanaarizvi@hotmail.com says:

      Thank you so much, Richard 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  4. Susan says:

    Not the lines as much as the overall feel of your poem gave me joy. We are so much, the soul is huge. That is how we get by.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Susan 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  5. gillena says:

    Indeed Sanaa, Indeed

    much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  6. I love your opening question: How art thy soul? A great way to begin a poem about “thy wandering soul.” Thanks for taking part in the challenge.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

    2. And thank you for submitting your most cherished poem to the challenge!! That makes me happy.

      1. adashofsunny says:

        My pleasure Sherry ❤️

  7. Kerry O'Connor says:

    The last three lines say it all.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  8. Debi says:

    I agree with Sherry, the introspective ‘how are you soul?” is an important moment we take too rarely. Your last lines are so true – life is incredible. Lovely

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Debi 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

    2. These were my sentiments exactly – so ditto what Debi said. 🙂

      1. adashofsunny says:

        Thank you so much, Hannah 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  9. Other Mary says:

    I agree, before anything else we must see to our souls.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Mary 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  10. Jim says:

    Tell it like it Iis was, Sanaa. I used to be a wondering soul. Motorcycle, long hair, hippy days. But my perpetual journey changed course after Mrs. Jim came.
    ..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thanks for stopping by, Jim 😀 Hope Mrs Jim is doing well ❤️

  11. Yes, life is, should be incredible. Thank you for reminding me.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Susie 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  12. Indeed, you’re so right.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so good to see you ❤️

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