Quickly
the blushing leaves in September
murmured amongst each other
as feeling
makes its way into my heart
at grey twilight.
I wish to be the name on parted lips
when world
will slowly fade and sky
comes rushing down
to kiss the earth.
Photo credits: Pinterest
Posted for Quadrille #64 @ dverse pub
and on Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads
Nice linking of wanting to be the name on parted lips and then the sky kissing the earth.
Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I agree with Frank. The echoing of parted lips and kiss works well.
Thank you so much, Charley 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Nic poem Sanaa. I don’t know how you keep coming up with these romantic poems!
Thank you so much, Toni 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I like this Sanaa…it gives me a feeling of the pressure of time…autumn and then winter…and how hearts can awake and realize, hopefully not too late, an ultimate wish…beautiful
Thank you so much, Janice 😀 so good to see you ❤️
So beautifully written!
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You had me at that title. And then I LOVE this:
“I wish to be the name on parted lips
when world
will slowly fade”
Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
(and thank you for the lovely prompt)
Loving the sweet nostalgia as a new season comes into view.
Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Lovely quadrille.
Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
This is so gorgeous…one of the best autumnal poems I’ve read in a while.
Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Beautiful! I “wish to be the name on parted lips” too – wonderful.
Thank you so much, V.J 😀 so good to see you ❤️
i love the blushing leaves of September, this makes me feel so tingly
Thank you so much, Gina 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Beautiful words.
Thank you so much, Anita 😀 so good to see you ❤️
I love how you’ve captured the sped with which autumn takes hold with its ‘blushing leaves in September’, Sanaa, and the shift to romance in the ‘name on parted lips’ and the sky rushing down to kiss the earth.
Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
This flows wonderfully
Thank you so much, Jae 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
Keep writing like this and you undoubtedly will be!
Aww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Rosemary 😍 so glad you liked it! ❤️
Ooh, I love the tenacious quality of your words — sensuous, careful and gripping.
The murmur, the name, and the kiss all create this romantic setting of mythical proportions.
Thank you so much, Anmol 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
The secret about being that name on parted lips is to say theirs as well holding your last embrace in your mind. I think that should work Sanaa!
Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Robin ❤️
I enjoyed your poem, and the lovely yellow of the image, the yellow of autumn.
Thank you so much, Annell 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Oh, this is beautiful. Wonderfully crafted!
Thank you so much, Susan 😀 so good to see you ❤️
There is a feeling of impetuousness in that last bit that feels as giddy and breathless as a first love.
Thank you so much, Rommy 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Sanaa this is stunning, and I think a new favorite of yours for me!!
Thank you so much, Carrie 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Such a pretty poem Sanaa!
Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Such a lovely poem.
Thank you so much, Vicki 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
Yes, yes–what they said, lovely, beautiful, romantic, allegorical. As to your title, it is stunning of itself; almost a separate poem.
Aww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️
The name on lips when sky kisses the earth…that’s intense! Romantic Love!
Thank you so much, Priscilla 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
I just really like this piece, this small poem, from start to finish ~ it captures the longing, the yearning, so simply, yet somehow, it comes across as so complex for the (word) capture. (Does that make sense? LOL – let me try again: simple words, for a complex set of emotions – yet somehow, the words you’ve chosen are rich – imbued with something “more” than a first glance/definition -. right. I give up today for comments.) I just really like this Sanaa – well done for a quadrille. 🙂
Aww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Pat 😍 so glad you liked it! ❤️
I wish to be the name on parted lips … such splendid phrase.
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Oh yes, “the name on parted lips ” — that is lovely.
Thank you so much, Misky 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
oh the soft, warm, sensual feelings your lovely poem incites…absolutely beautiful
Thank you so much, Dorianna 😀 so good to see you ❤️
A longing, lovliness to this poem, Sanaa. I love the sweet soft ending.
Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️