In darkness thus celestial shadows hide
With naked truth, ardor and untutor’d youth.
Long left to govern, bear you in mind.
In light saccharine buds bloom like jewel
With clear blue skies, larks and gold sunshine
Though still, the dark proves more defined.
Your scent drifts upon my limpid soul.
Photo credits: www.pinterest.com
Form: Sevenling
Posted on MTB @ dVerse Pub
also for the Tuesday Platform
Sanaa, you have brought the gorgeous lilt and lull of your usual style to this new form. I love it.
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That scent has to be wonderful… wonderful
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Dream dreamy words.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
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What a lovely sensual dreamy poem!
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Such a soft and gentle poem. Lovely.
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You truly took this form and made it your beautiful own, Sanaa…lovely!
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Beautifully penned, Sanaa! Really an ethereal write.
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I specially love the second stanza of the poem with:
With clear blue skies, larks and gold sunshine
Good one Sanaa ~
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Beautiful words, Sanaa. Soft and sensual. Very good writing!
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Pure imagery delight: color, scent… everything!
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Delicate and airy 🙂
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Oh…………absolutely beautiful! And I absolutely LOVE the photo and the last line! So very happy and calm and serene to read this as my morning poetry. Beautiful!
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This is gorgeous, Sanaa. Lovely, gentle take at Sevenling! 🙂
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Lovely air of mystery in that last line.
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Wonderful take Sanaa! Great lines
Hank
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Yes, you deserve all the plus’s; lovely, sensual, gorgeous, gentle, wonderful, joyous–& yes somehow the form was bent superbly to your will, your vision & style; very impressive.
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Beautifully done, Sanaa.
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That last line…now that really grabs me!
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There is a certain majesty in the dark.
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“saccharine buds bloom like jewel” Love that…beautiful writing
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Your words felt bathed in a muted purple, quite lovely.
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As always, loving your language, and the vivid scenarios you create with it.
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