Sevenling

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In darkness thus celestial shadows hide
With naked truth, ardor and untutor’d youth.
Long left to govern, bear you in mind.

In light saccharine buds bloom like jewel
With clear blue skies, larks and gold sunshine
Though still, the dark proves more defined.

Your scent drifts upon my limpid soul.

 

 

Photo credits: www.pinterest.com

Form: Sevenling

Posted on MTB @ dVerse Pub

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Comments

  1. Sanaa, you have brought the gorgeous lilt and lull of your usual style to this new form. I love it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello De Jackson,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  2. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    That scent has to be wonderful… wonderful

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  3. Anna :o] says:

    Dream dreamy words.
    Kind regards
    Anna :o]

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Anna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  4. kanzensakura says:

    What a lovely sensual dreamy poem!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Toni,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  5. Misky says:

    Such a soft and gentle poem. Lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Misky,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  6. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    You truly took this form and made it your beautiful own, Sanaa…lovely!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gayle,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  7. Mary says:

    Beautifully penned, Sanaa! Really an ethereal write.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  8. Grace says:

    I specially love the second stanza of the poem with:

    With clear blue skies, larks and gold sunshine

    Good one Sanaa ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Grace,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  9. barbara says:

    Beautiful words, Sanaa. Soft and sensual. Very good writing!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Barbara,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  10. Pure imagery delight: color, scent… everything!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Magaly,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  11. Delicate and airy 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kim,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  12. lillian says:

    Oh…………absolutely beautiful! And I absolutely LOVE the photo and the last line! So very happy and calm and serene to read this as my morning poetry. Beautiful!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Lillian,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  13. kelvin s.m. says:

    This is gorgeous, Sanaa. Lovely, gentle take at Sevenling! 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kelvin,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  14. Bryan Ens says:

    Lovely air of mystery in that last line.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bryan,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  15. kaykuala says:

    Wonderful take Sanaa! Great lines

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  16. Yes, you deserve all the plus’s; lovely, sensual, gorgeous, gentle, wonderful, joyous–& yes somehow the form was bent superbly to your will, your vision & style; very impressive.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Glenn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  17. Kerry O'Connor says:

    Beautifully done, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  18. Timoteo says:

    That last line…now that really grabs me!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Timoteo,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  19. Rommy says:

    There is a certain majesty in the dark.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rommy,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  20. “saccharine buds bloom like jewel” Love that…beautiful writing

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  21. Helen says:

    Your words felt bathed in a muted purple, quite lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Helen,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  22. As always, loving your language, and the vivid scenarios you create with it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

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