Sevenling (madre)

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Love’s like moonlight ov’er cherry blossom trees
With roseate boughs, cooling breeze and stream.
Mingled with baby’s breath, to cherish and hold.

Though nature temperate as slowly setting sun
Stirring strong contentment as battles brio won.
Cause nothing’s ever ended but only just begun.

Madre, behold her lustrous hue.

 

 

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Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads

Posted on Meeting the Bar @ dVerse Pub

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Comments

  1. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Who can ever be stronger than our mother… we are blessed by her strength.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  2. A sweet, sensitive and flowing sevenling.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gemma,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  3. lillian says:

    This is stunning! I especially love the first stanza….this love is visceral. Beautifully penned!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Lillian,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  4. kelvin s.m. says:

    I rather like the elements used here and the adoration expressed in every line of your sevenling; as juxtaposed to what a “madre” is expected to channel. Another lovely take, Sanaa! 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kelvin,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  5. Rommy says:

    Mother Nature does put on a glorious show.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rommy,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  6. Bryan Ens says:

    Nothings ever ended but only begun. Love that line!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bryan,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  7. I particularly love that closing line.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  8. I like that you’ve brought some rhyme to this, Sanaa. Love the versatility of this form, and everybody’s different style with it. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello De Jackson,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  9. debi says:

    Wonderful last line.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Debi,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  10. shawna says:

    This is so beautiful, Sanaa. It’s one of my favorites of yours. I especially like the first stanza.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Shawna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  11. Sherry Marr says:

    This is very lovely to read, and to imagine….I especially love “nothing’s ever ended, but only just begun.” How did you become so wise, so young? You write beautifully, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  12. Ellecee says:

    This sevenling is lovely. Liken to a warm embrace. I especially like the last line.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Ellecee,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  13. Myrna says:

    “Madre” Such a sacred word to me. Lovely witing Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Myrna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 😀
      xoxo

  14. Anna :o] says:

    A beautiful beautiful write.
    Anna :o]

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Anna,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  15. Candy says:

    So much beauty and tenderness in this poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Candy,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  16. Beautiful….I adore your ending.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  17. These are very controlled and beautiful words. The pleasing sounds and rhythm almost feels maternal. Just lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Ashley,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

  18. Manicddaily says:

    Mothers are certainly lustrous–thanks. k.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Karin,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  19. grapeling says:

    a gracious paean ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Michael,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Khaya,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  20. Gazel says:

    I loved the beginning and the ending, Amazing! Your poems give us a reason to keep admiring and enjoying our blessings. Looking forward to reading your new poems.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gazel,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

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