Love’s like moonlight ov’er cherry blossom trees
With roseate boughs, cooling breeze and stream.
Mingled with baby’s breath, to cherish and hold.
Though nature temperate as slowly setting sun
Stirring strong contentment as battles brio won.
Cause nothing’s ever ended but only just begun.
Madre, behold her lustrous hue.
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Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads
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Who can ever be stronger than our mother… we are blessed by her strength.
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A sweet, sensitive and flowing sevenling.
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This is stunning! I especially love the first stanza….this love is visceral. Beautifully penned!
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I rather like the elements used here and the adoration expressed in every line of your sevenling; as juxtaposed to what a “madre” is expected to channel. Another lovely take, Sanaa! 🙂
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Mother Nature does put on a glorious show.
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Nothings ever ended but only begun. Love that line!
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I particularly love that closing line.
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I like that you’ve brought some rhyme to this, Sanaa. Love the versatility of this form, and everybody’s different style with it. 🙂
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Wonderful last line.
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This is so beautiful, Sanaa. It’s one of my favorites of yours. I especially like the first stanza.
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This is very lovely to read, and to imagine….I especially love “nothing’s ever ended, but only just begun.” How did you become so wise, so young? You write beautifully, Sanaa.
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This sevenling is lovely. Liken to a warm embrace. I especially like the last line.
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“Madre” Such a sacred word to me. Lovely witing Sanaa.
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A beautiful beautiful write.
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So much beauty and tenderness in this poem.
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Beautiful….I adore your ending.
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These are very controlled and beautiful words. The pleasing sounds and rhythm almost feels maternal. Just lovely.
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Mothers are certainly lustrous–thanks. k.
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a gracious paean ~
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Beautiful!
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I loved the beginning and the ending, Amazing! Your poems give us a reason to keep admiring and enjoying our blessings. Looking forward to reading your new poems.
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