Prompt Nights – Perfection [1]


“Ideals are like stars; you will not succeed in touching them with your hands. But like the seafaring man on the desert of waters, you choose them as your guides, and following them you will reach your destiny.” – Carl Schurz

“Every particular in nature, a leaf, a drop, a crystal, a moment of time is related to the whole, and partakes of the perfection of the whole.” – Ralph Waldo Emerson

“Dancers, many dancers today can do so much technically. You can give them steps that are complicated, then more complicated, pyrotechnical – and they can execute these steps to perfection. But to do simple steps with a pure classical line, that is truly difficult.” – Natalia Makarova

“Perfection is finally attained not when there is no longer anything to add but when there is no longer anything to take away, when a body has been stripped down to its nakedness.” – Antoine de Saint-Exupery

“If God had made a perfect world, it would be a magic trick, not creation, with no meaning or place for us to learn and create. Mankind is not yet ready for a perfect world. We do not know how to appreciate perfection.” – Bernie Siegel

“But quality of work can be expected only through personal satisfaction, dedication and enjoyment. In our profession, precision and perfection are not a dispensable luxury, but a simple necessity.” – Niklaus Wirth

Welcome to Prompt Nights! Ever since the first time I started writing, I was fascinated with the idea of creating my own individual sphere. I was inspired by three outstanding online communities: Poets United, Imaginary garden for real Toads and dVerse Poets Pub. Which is why I like to think of Prompt Nights as an extension of these glorious communities. Tonight, I want you guys to express your poetic views regarding the concept of perfection. What is perfection? What role does it play in your life? Do you strive for perfection when it comes to writing or painting? Being a Poet, it’s very important for us to get our message through to the reader. And so, for this very purpose we strive to find the perfect words to display our deepest emotions. I can’t even begin to describe the number of times I tweak my poems before I feel that they are just right! For further inspiration, please refer to the two amazing poems below:

The Habit of Perfection

by Gerard Manley Hopkins

Elected Silence, sing to me
And beat upon my whorled ear,
Pipe me to pastures still and be
The music that I care to hear.

Shape nothing, lips; be lovely-dumb:
It is the shut, the curfew sent
From there where all surrenders come
Which only makes you eloquent.

Be shelled, eyes, with double dark
And find the uncreated light:
This ruck and reel which you remark
Coils, keeps, and teases simple sight.

Palate, the hutch of tasty lust,
Desire not to be rinsed with wine:
The can must be so sweet, the crust
So fresh that come in fasts divine!

Nostrils, your careless breath that spend
Upon the stir and keep of pride,
What relish shall the censers send
Along the sanctuary side!

O feel-of-primrose hands, O feet
That want the yield of plushy sward,
But you shall walk the golden street
And you unhouse and house the Lord.

And, Poverty, be thou the bride
And now the marriage feast begun,
And lily-colored clothes provide
Your spouse not laboured-at nor spun.

Sonnet XV:

-William Shakespeare

When I consider everything that grows
Holds in perfection but a little moment,
That this huge stage presenteth nought but shows
Whereon the stars in secret influence comment;
When I perceive that men as plants increase,
Cheered and check’d even by the selfsame sky,
Vaunt in their youthful sap, at height decrease,
And wear their brave state out of memory;
Then the conceit of this inconstant stay
Sets you most rich in youth before my sight,
Where wasteful Time debateth with Decay
To change your day of youth to sullied night;
And all in war with Time for love of you,
As he takes from you, I engraft you new.


So pick up a pen and lets begin! As always the prompt will remain open the entire week so that everyone can write according to their own pace and time. Those who wish to link old poems are most welcome to do so. Please click on the blue widget below. When it opens be sure to click on “add your link.” Now skip the blanks and proceed directly to “try here” written at the end in small font. It will direct you on how to link your poem. Please visit other Poets and do comment on their poems. Have fun ❤️

16 thoughts on “Prompt Nights – Perfection [1]

  1. Sanaa says:

    Looking forward to your entries ❤️

  2. Herotomost says:

    Hmmmm….like the prompt. Time to work.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Corey,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Looking forward to read your wonderful poem 🙂

  3. Mary says:

    Couldn’t figure out how to put my name in…sigh…so I have the link to my post.
    This is a confusing format.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad to see you 😀
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      PS: I fixed your link 🙂

  4. gillena says:

    Happy New Year to all at Prompt Nights

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated, lots of love 🙂

  5. Debi says:

    Thanks for the prompt Sanaa 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Debi,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  6. L. Moon says:

    Sanaa, hope your prompt nights go well. I will join in when I can – this week I am off the grid celebrating. Wishing you all the best.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hi Leslie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  7. Locomente says:

    From the quotes to your words… Loved all of them 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Satya,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

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