I strive to find the words;
To bring me close towards,
To clear the misconception,
To answer without a question.
Our small but distinct flaws;
Didn’t matter just because….
I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.
Ocean of colors blue;
Proved it plain and true.
For though in numbers few;
These verses were written for you.
I strive to find those words;
Which brings me close towards….
I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.
Oh clear the misconceptions;
Lets answer without the questions.
Our flaws distinct and small;
Didn’t matter just because,
My rhymes and all my verbs;
As sudden as flight of birds….
I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.
Your virtue can my language paint;
And leave me not to fall or faint.
I strive to find the words because;
To let the world know root of cause.
Won’t you hear? Oh read my thoughts
Just in case we come across….
I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.
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What an ideal subject choice for this first prompt…..there are few things that more aptly fit the description for perfection than a rose!
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Everyone has small flaws, but in their own way – but hopefully everyone is a ‘rose of sheer perfection’ to someone.
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That first blush of love is a perfect and beautiful moment.
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I think I’ve mentioned it before, but I love your sense of rhyme. π And in this case, the repetitive verse as well! Nice start to the year!
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Ha, I had a perfect rose in mine too…& this is a great start Sanaa….
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As lovely as a blushing rose itself.
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A lovely write. Full of love and inspiration.
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I think only in the rose you can find perfection… Wonderful refrain.
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Lets answer without the questions….. Absolutely!!! That’s the only way!
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“Let’s answer without the questions”
Luv the ‘ love sync ‘ implied in that line, my favourite of the entire poem
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Much love…
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Ahh..the intoxication of love…sometimes we can’t help but look..maybe that’s good however! Happy new year to you Sanaa – and very good to read your work again too
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“Letβs answer without the questions,”
indeed. I like your refrain too! nice
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enjoyed reading this.
you’re a songwriter indeed! π
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lovely refrain !
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Such a pretty piece, Sanaa. I love the refrain.
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I love the refrain. The repetition brings to mind what I question when it comes to perfection: will it be all the same, forever and ever, once the perfect state is found?
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“A rose of sheer perfection” ~ Wow! This is so beautiful.
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Beautiful imagery.
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I loved that repeating refrain…’a rose of sheer perfection’…..and how it focuses all the rest to it.
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A rose is an exquisite flower but, it does have thorns and one must be careful when handling such a flower of beauty as the thorns can hurt.
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Beautiful writing on a beautiful subject. Lovely. π
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Such a perfect flow to your rhythmic piece.
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Beautiful song of love, Sanaa. Perhaps it is only in the early days of love that we see perfection in each other however that soon fades to reality. I wonder about perfection and whether or not it truly exists.
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Exquisite word play here. I am in ecstasy. π
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Very creative piece.
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What a beautifully crafted poem you have given us for the start of the year.
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Loved this piece – so romantic with just the lightest touch of whimsy … for, of course, no one is “sheer perfection” … unless they are someone’s beloved. A wonderful write, Sanaa.
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Ahhh the repetition of “a rose of sheer perfection’ is well… perfect π
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How so trying when it comes to relationships starting out! But once clicked then there is no saying of any more of time-wasting. A genuine love of a loved one will always give rather than take!
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Its like a song… Loved the flow!
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Wow…such a flow of beauty…
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my favourite stanzaa-
“your virtues can my language paint…
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Yes we are all seekers, striving to to find the words, make sense of this world.
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Nice to have someone who seems perfect to you!
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Lovely song! Roses are indeed the perfect flower of all flowers! Also important to find the ‘rose’ inside ourselves …from self-love the way to love other ~ Happy New Year to you, Sanaa!
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We all have thorns, but to someone hopefully we are a perfect rose. Beautiful piece and thank you for such a thoughtful prompt.
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Gorgeous. Love the repetition here.
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