Perfection

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I strive to find the words;
To bring me close towards,
To clear the misconception,
To answer without a question.
Our small but distinct flaws;
Didn’t matter just because….

I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.

Ocean of colors blue;
Proved it plain and true.
For though in numbers few;
These verses were written for you.
I strive to find those words;
Which brings me close towards….

I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.

Oh clear the misconceptions;
Lets answer without the questions.
Our flaws distinct and small;
Didn’t matter just because,
My rhymes and all my verbs;
As sudden as flight of birds….

I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.

Your virtue can my language paint;
And leave me not to fall or faint.
I strive to find the words because;
To let the world know root of cause.
Won’t you hear? Oh read my thoughts
Just in case we come across….

I glanced in your
direction;
A rose of sheer
perfection.

 

 

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Comments

  1. CC says:

    What an ideal subject choice for this first prompt…..there are few things that more aptly fit the description for perfection than a rose!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello C.C

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  2. Mary says:

    Everyone has small flaws, but in their own way – but hopefully everyone is a ‘rose of sheer perfection’ to someone.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  3. Rommy says:

    That first blush of love is a perfect and beautiful moment.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rommy,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  4. Vinay Leo R. says:

    I think I’ve mentioned it before, but I love your sense of rhyme. πŸ™‚ And in this case, the repetitive verse as well! Nice start to the year!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Vinay,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  5. Sumana Roy says:

    Ha, I had a perfect rose in mine too…& this is a great start Sanaa….

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sumana,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  6. Debi says:

    As lovely as a blushing rose itself.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Debi,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  7. totomai says:

    A lovely write. Full of love and inspiration.

    Happy New Year, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Totomai,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  8. Bjorn says:

    I think only in the rose you can find perfection… Wonderful refrain.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  9. Thotpurge says:

    Lets answer without the questions….. Absolutely!!! That’s the only way!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Thotpurge,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  10. gillena says:

    “Let’s answer without the questions”

    Luv the ‘ love sync ‘ implied in that line, my favourite of the entire poem

    Thanks for dropping in at my Sunday Lime Sanaa

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  11. Jae Rose says:

    Ahh..the intoxication of love…sometimes we can’t help but look..maybe that’s good however! Happy new year to you Sanaa – and very good to read your work again too

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Jae Rose,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
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  12. OT says:

    “Let’s answer without the questions,”

    indeed. I like your refrain too! nice

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello OT,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  13. dsnake1 says:

    enjoyed reading this.
    you’re a songwriter indeed! πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Dsnake,

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  14. Suyash Jha says:

    lovely refrain !

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Suyash,

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  15. Kerry O'Connor says:

    Such a pretty piece, Sanaa. I love the refrain.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Kerry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  16. I love the refrain. The repetition brings to mind what I question when it comes to perfection: will it be all the same, forever and ever, once the perfect state is found?
    β™₯

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Magaly,

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  17. “A rose of sheer perfection” ~ Wow! This is so beautiful.
    Wish you a very happy new year, Sanaa πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Purba,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  18. Beautiful imagery.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Natasa,

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      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  19. I loved that repeating refrain…’a rose of sheer perfection’…..and how it focuses all the rest to it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Donna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  20. Truedessa says:

    A rose is an exquisite flower but, it does have thorns and one must be careful when handling such a flower of beauty as the thorns can hurt.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Truedessa,

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  21. Beautiful writing on a beautiful subject. Lovely. πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Paul,

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  22. Tatius says:

    Such a perfect flow to your rhythmic piece.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Tatius,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  23. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    Beautiful song of love, Sanaa. Perhaps it is only in the early days of love that we see perfection in each other however that soon fades to reality. I wonder about perfection and whether or not it truly exists.
    Gayle ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gayle,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  24. Jamztoma says:

    Exquisite word play here. I am in ecstasy. πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello James,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
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  25. ZQ says:

    Very creative piece.
    ZQ

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sir,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  26. Old Egg says:

    What a beautifully crafted poem you have given us for the start of the year.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  27. Wendy Bourke says:

    Loved this piece – so romantic with just the lightest touch of whimsy … for, of course, no one is “sheer perfection” … unless they are someone’s beloved. A wonderful write, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Wendy,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  28. Ahhh the repetition of “a rose of sheer perfection’ is well… perfect πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Pearl,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  29. kaykuala h says:

    How so trying when it comes to relationships starting out! But once clicked then there is no saying of any more of time-wasting. A genuine love of a loved one will always give rather than take!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
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  30. Locomente says:

    Its like a song… Loved the flow!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Satya,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  31. sreeja says:

    Wow…such a flow of beauty…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sreeja,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  32. gazal says:

    my favourite stanzaa-
    “your virtues can my language paint…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gazal,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  33. annell4 says:

    Yes we are all seekers, striving to to find the words, make sense of this world.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Annell,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  34. Nice to have someone who seems perfect to you!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  35. humbird says:

    Lovely song! Roses are indeed the perfect flower of all flowers! Also important to find the ‘rose’ inside ourselves …from self-love the way to love other ~ Happy New Year to you, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Humbird,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      PS: Happy New Year πŸ˜€

  36. We all have thorns, but to someone hopefully we are a perfect rose. Beautiful piece and thank you for such a thoughtful prompt.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  37. Gorgeous. Love the repetition here.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello De Jackson,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

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