Of Lament and Love (a rubaiyat)

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Pour me twilight in a cup
From restless dreams, wake me up
I fear, love has seized careless heart
As though a rose from bristly shrub

Hope’s an immortal bird in a gilded cage
Singing of woes can nothing assuage
Come, let there bloom lilies of faith
With rhythm of heart, come fill your page

When the sun is low on lavender field
Believe broken souls are often healed
I listen to the whispering summer breeze
To observe what comfort it would yield

Perhaps nothing’s more peaceful than sleeping swan
In the cruelest hour when benevolence is gone
They are more at ease with time’s uncertain wing
I drift along with sunset, seedling and song

 

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Posted for Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

and on Monday Writes @ My Blog – Verses

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Comments

  1. gillena says:

    This is classical and beautiful Sanaa

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  2. You make me want to start playing with the Rubaiyat form too. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh!❤️ Thank you so much, Rosemary 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️

  3. Kerry says:

    This made me smile to see the rubaiyat form – Margaret and Gillena have inspired us all.
    🙂

    Your descriptions are so beautifully conceived – really love each one, especially the swansong.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  4. Thotpurge says:

    When the sun is low on lavender field
    Believe broken souls are often healed

    so pleasant…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  5. Another favorite by you, dearest Sanaa. Especially this line, “Hope’s an immortal bird in a gilded cage”. It says so many truths, and says them beautifully.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww!❤️ Thank you so much, Magaly 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️

  6. Old Egg says:

    How beautifully your poetry fitted in with the illustrations Sanaa. Curiously when I was a teenager I had a copy of the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam (Fitzgerald’s old translation) which was a great companion for me for years.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  7. There is a gentle rhythm to this poem, Sanaa; the language is soft and comforting, I especially like the lines:
    ‘When the sun is low on lavender field
    Believe broken souls are often healed
    I listen to the whispering summer breeze
    To observe what comfort it would yield’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  8. Jim says:

    Beautuful, Sanaa. Soft with thoughts we like to hear.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jim 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  9. Beautiful.. We mix our world eyes with nature’s beauty and are blind to so much of it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susie 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  10. annell4 says:

    Lovely words!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Annell 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  11. gillena says:

    Thank you for linking to Monday WRites Sanaa

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      My pleasure, Gillena 🙂

      much love… ❤️

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