November 18th, notes for further study

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Spoiling me
with the lightest brush of your lips,
a smile
a parting
and sweet disorder.
I reckon
you know what goes on inside my head
long after
your gaze leaves the room,
that the last strawberry would taste
the best of all.


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Posted for ‘Quadrille #69’ @ dVerse Pub

And for Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

50 Replies to “November 18th, notes for further study”

    1. Awww gosh! ❀️ Thank you so much, Lillian πŸ˜€ so glad you enjoyed it! ❀️

      (and thank you for the lovely prompt)

  1. You always bring a touch of romance with you, Sanaa, and sweetness in this poem, too. You have also reminded me that there are strawberries in our fridge begging me to eat them for breakfast! I love the list of three:
    β€˜a smile
    a parting
    and sweet disorder’.

  2. Ooh, this is delectable, Sanaa! Romantic and sensuous β€” the brush of lips, the last strawberry, et al. set the mood. I love how brief it is like that gaze, and in that, it encompasses everything. <3 πŸ™‚

  3. In general, sooo right, Sanaa. Of course still in mind there will be another. I remember one that wasn’t, I stead it was with a hint of much pain to follow.

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