Spoiling me
with the lightest brush of your lips,
a smile
a parting
and sweet disorder.
I reckon
you know what goes on inside my head
long after
your gaze leaves the room,
aware
that the last strawberry would taste
the best of all.
Photo credits: Pinterest
Posted for ‘Quadrille #69’ @ dVerse Pub
And for Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads
50 Responses
Delicious post! In so many ways.
Ah….you always provide a dash of sunny and I love reading your posts! So glad you posted to the prompt.
Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Lillian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️
(and thank you for the lovely prompt)
You get my vote for the sweetest poem out on the trail so far; and in a good way. One must crack a smile post-reading of this; your dash of Sunny is contagious.
Yayyy ❤️ Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
i like the gentleness of your poem and i LOVE that photo!!!!!!!
Thank you so much, Jade Li 😀 so good to see you ❤️
We do think others know what is going on inside our heads especially those we are closest to.
Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Frank ❤️
Nice metaphor!
Thank you so much, Jilly 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Your poem is a gentle moment, Sunny. Nicely expressed.
Thank you so much, Jo-anne 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
You always bring a touch of romance with you, Sanaa, and sweetness in this poem, too. You have also reminded me that there are strawberries in our fridge begging me to eat them for breakfast! I love the list of three:
‘a smile
a parting
and sweet disorder’.
Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Kim 😍 so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️
It is always a delight to read your romantic poetry Sanaa especially when there is innuendo in it as well.
Thank you so much, Robin 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Ooh, this is delectable, Sanaa! Romantic and sensuous — the brush of lips, the last strawberry, et al. set the mood. I love how brief it is like that gaze, and in that, it encompasses everything. <3 🙂
Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Anmol 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️
Sweeeeet
😄😄😄
“aware
that the last strawberry would taste
the best of all.”
That made me smile and sigh – lovely.
Thank you so much, Raivenne 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
Sweet poem. Nice relationship.
Thank you so much, Cressida 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
Luscious, Sanaa, and sensual.
Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I had strawberries for breakfast. There are no coincidences.
😂😂😂👌🏻❤️
Its good to be spoiled…lol. This was light and fluffy and made me smile. You nailed one of the best parts of being in love. Great writing!!!
Thank you so much, Corey 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
I so love the last lines here… that strawberry though, seems like just the beginning… I would want another..
Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I love how that last strawberry tastes the best of all. Very cool.
Thank you so much, Sherry 😀 so good to see you ❤️
Tasty poem
Thank you so much, KB 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
In general, sooo right, Sanaa. Of course still in mind there will be another. I remember one that wasn’t, I stead it was with a hint of much pain to follow.
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Thank you so much, Jim 🙂 so good to see you ❤️
I love this Sanaa.. think it goes up as one my favourites from all your recent posts!
Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
Also perfect for Anmol’s prompt. Oh these sweet dashes, they are a pulsing entwined living. Don’t hold them young one, taste richly rather.
Thank you so much, Lona 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
you have such a way to make the words taste so beautifully and the colour you create in my head just makes me sigh
Awwww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Gina 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️
I absolutely adore that closing line, Sanaa! 💙
Thank you so much, Kimberly 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️
The image of the last strawberry at the end adds so much to the sensuality of the poem. Beautifully done, Sanaa.
Thank you so much, Shoaib 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️
I love the conversational- yet naughty tone this takes.
Thank you so much, Vivian 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️