Romance

Spread the love

Across the magnificent hall;
A heart was thus stolen.
As eyes lifted to thine;
In one flashing moment.

The night strewn;
With starry sky.
Alas! Thee vision;
Had twisted awry.

Though words unspoken;
A hidden bond remained.
Sparks of fiery passion;
In features restrained.

To be able to touch;
Would have been sublime.
Alas! Igniting the soul;
The longing was confined!

Pray tell how long?
Till longing pacified?
Alas! thou knew not
Emotions intensified.

Across the magnificent hall;
A heart was thus stolen.
As eyes lifted to thine;
In one flashing moment.

 

Photo Credits: www.1zoom.net

Posted for Poems in April @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. blogoratti says:

    …’In one flashing moment’…sums its all pretty nicely. Love is everything and so much more!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Blogoratti,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a wonderful week!

  2. Bjorn says:

    Oh I love the feeling of love at first sight.. wonderful

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it!
      Highly appreciated 🙂

  3. Debi says:

    Alas! thou knew not… A one sided-love affair is not good. He needs to open his eyes!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Debi,

      Sometimes love needs time to emerge 😉 Glad you liked it!
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
      xoxo

  4. I’ve had moments like that and you captured it perfectly.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Moskowitz,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week!

  5. gillena says:

    really nice; just one glance can oft times do the trick

    much love…

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it 🙂
      Yes it often does 😉 Lots of love
      xoxo

  6. The essence of romance!

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
      xoxo

  7. Gail says:

    A pleasant poem

    Thanks for your visit and comment

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Gail,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
      xoxo

  8. Other Mary says:

    Ah, such longing.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Mary,

      Ah yes.. the longing is thus the essence..! 😉
      Glad you liked it! Highly appreciated 🙂
      xoxo

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Hannah,

      Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it dear 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great day ahead!
      xoxo

  9. L. Moon says:

    The restraining element creates a wonderful tension 😉
    “stolen” “spoken” “passion” all the things that spark a good romance 😀
    Fantastic Ms. Sunshine

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Leslie,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
      xoxo

  10. “in one flashing moment” Love does seem to come lightening quick at times…beautiful

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Susie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it dear 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love
      xoxo

  11. grapeling says:

    one wonders about that moment ~

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Grapeling,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week!

  12. Manicddaily says:

    Hey Sanaa–like a song. Thanks. k.

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Manicddaily,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Have a great week ahead!

  13. Jim says:

    A nice start, Sanaa, but then, … Some last long, others may merely be ‘infatuation’. I like the way you followed the formula. It works out good.
    Thank you for peeking in on my ‘Legs’ too. My love poem is at a different place, here: http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2015/04/another-love-poem-day-21-of-napowrimo.html
    ..

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Jim,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated! Enjoy the weekend!

  14. vandana says:

    Such a beautiful and perfect romantic piece of poetry……………dissolving deep into hearts of lovers:)

    1. adashofsunny says:

      Hello Vandana,

      Thank you so much, glad you liked it dear 😀
      Highly appreciated! Lots of love 🙂
      xoxo

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