Little (over the top)

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Storm clouds, threatening the view outside.
I pondered seeing how bitter was the wind.
Although it seemed bad omen, atmosphere
inside was something else.

‘Bring us, two chocolate-covered strawberry
cheesecakes, I heard they have the best ones
here!’ I observed as he exchanged few words
with the waiter.

The looks he gave me were saccharine sweet
as though pretending I hadn’t noticed prices
right from the beginning. Soon the sun came
out bright as fire.

“Two hundred dollars!” he spluttered. “What
in the world’sΒ name did you order!” I flashed,
him a smile, smoothing the hem of my Marie
Claire gown.

 

 

Photo credits:Β www.pinterest.com

Posted for Fireblossom Friday @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Rose says:

    Love it!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rose πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  2. Rose says:

    πŸ˜€

    1. Sanaa says:

      πŸ˜‰

  3. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    Yes… but you are worth it… grinning back πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bjorn πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  4. Bekkie says:

    I’m leaving a test comment to see if things are working. If you need anything else let me know.

    Love the poem.

    1. Sanaa says:

      It’s working now ❀️ thank you so much, Bekkie πŸ˜€

      xoxo

  5. paul scribbles says:

    wow…pricey cheesecake…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❀️ thanks for stopping by, Paul πŸ™‚

  6. hedgewitch says:

    Made me chuckle!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hedgewitch πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  7. Kerry O'Connor says:

    Many layers of social interaction happening here, Sanaa. You presented the scene meticulously.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kerry πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  8. Yikes! You set the scene to perfection. An expensive date! LOL.

    1. Sanaa says:

      LOL❀️ Thank you so much, Sherry πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

  9. I had time to read your poem properly. You made me hungry. Lol! Glad everything is working here. Have a good weekend! Hugs!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bekkie πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  10. Margaret says:

    Perhaps no second date? ha.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Lol definitely not ❀️ thanks for stopping by, Margaret πŸ™‚

  11. gillena says:

    “I flashed,
    him a smile, smoothing the hem of my Marie
    Claire gown.”

    The only thing to do
    (βœΏβ— β€Ώβ— )

    muchlove…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena πŸ™‚ so glad you liked it ❀️

  12. Fireblossom says:

    Ha! Buyer beware, dude. Carry on, girl!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❀️ Thanks for stopping by, Shay πŸ˜€

  13. annell4 says:

    Just a bit over the top!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❀️ thanks for stopping by, Annell πŸ˜€

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Susie πŸ˜€ so good to see you ❀️

  14. Sara McNulty says:

    Cool ending! You made me hungry with the photo!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara πŸ˜€ so glad you liked it ❀️

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