Lavender Sky

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Poem inspired by the title of Richard Wilbur’s poem, ‘Love calls us to the things of this world.’

This morning wasn’t grey 
rather
it was dipped into soothing lavender 
as silence 
is replaced by sounds of early traffic.
Carefully,
the white-heaven bound birds 
glide down 
bringing with them freshly baked hope,
as I manage
to pull myself out of bed.

Feeling 
then calls me to the things of this world
to madness
to chaos 
and to the dark intentions of disquiet,
my mind 
ponders over political salad dressing 
where vegetable bits
turn one against something as relevant 
as kosher salt;
is verity
merely a word lost in translation? 

I greet the day 
with fire in my soul 
and determination raging in my breast,
let there be a breeze of change
let tranquility ripen slowly,
in the midst of life we encounter death
come
let there be development of tenderness,
let us stare
into the eyes of time, the unthinkable
let the young, old and restless
step into the field, come
let us plough peace as our new principle.

 

Photo credits: Sunny Day by Joseph Zbukvic

Posted on Midweek Motif @ Poets United

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Comments

  1. HA says:

    “where vegetable bits/turn one against something as relevant/as kosher salt”: Ah, this bit made me smile — I think this is so characterisitic of the subcontinent politics and all that it entails, beyond the carelessly drawn geographical boundaries. I know and I understand.
    The morning wakefulness with its natural wonder moving on to a reacquaintance with the madness of this world is so well portrayed. I love the final stanza with its determination for a better world, for a much-needed change, led by those who are tired of this systematic disrepair and chaos.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Anmol 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️

  2. Dear Sanaa! I missed reading your beautiful poetry. The snippets on Instagram don’t always tell the full story. 🙂

    This is such a wonderful poem; so much is contained in the second stanza
    “my mind /ponders over political salad dressing …”

    And the determination of the speaker to plough peace in a mad and chaotic world is encouraging.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Khaya 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  3. Susan says:

    Wow! This is my new favorite of your poems, Sanaa! To be “dipped into soothing lavender ” may be the only way to bravely “step into the field
    ploughing peace.” Beautiful, powerful, strong!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Susan 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️

  4. I LOVE a lavendar sky! and the heaven-bound birds bearing hope. I love the meeting of the day with fire and determination. Yes, please, bring on the winds of change! We need them to blow EVERYWHERE.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 😀 thanks for stopping by, Sherry ❤️

  5. Magical Mystical Teacher says:

    The world is in such desperate need of peace. May your closing lines come true…soon!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Amen! ❤️ Thank you so much, MMT 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️

  6. gillena says:

    Luv how the pace quickens so by the final verse we are ready to rally to the call. Yes let us plough!
    Happy you dropped by my blog today Sanaa

    Much🔷️☺🔷️love

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

      Much🌺🌼love

  7. Old Egg says:

    What a beautiful, powerful poem of hope this is Sanaa. The sad part in the world is how much money is made by making armaments as conflicts and wars are encouraged just to make a profit regardless of the harm this does. Larger nations who profit from this talk of peace but are slow to achieve it while the money keeps rolling in.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  8. Myrna says:

    I think this is now my favorite of yours Sanaa. How beautifully you wove in the concerns of your thoughts in the morning. I like this so much.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Myrna 😀 so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️

  9. Thotpurge says:

    is verity
    merely a word lost in translation? … love that!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  10. Sumana Roy says:

    “come
    let us plough peace as our new principle.”…”plough” Love the vigor and determination compressed in this word. And also the alliteration. Beautiful, Sanaa, as always.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sumana 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

      (and thank you for the lovely prompt)

  11. I really like the colours in the first stanza, Sanaa, so gentle – a soft morning – which changes abruptly in the second stanza to the madness and chaos. I like the hint of frustration the lines:
    ‘my mind
    ponders over political salad dressing
    where vegetable bits
    turn one against something as relevant
    as kosher salt’.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Kim 😍 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  12. You are so adept with descriptive phrases! I love this…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  13. Jane Dougherty says:

    So many good metaphors in this, the new-baked bread, the loss in translation, the political salad dressing…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jane 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  14. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    This has to be the best poem by you I ever read…. all the metaphors (I will think about this eating my salad)…

    Maybe we are too distracted by pinpricks of less importance and forget the road we should walk together

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Bjorn 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️

  15. I agree that this is one of your better efforts. Poetically, it dances off the page and rattles my cage. The two divergent points of view begin their Olympian wrestling match as you shake the slumber and the chaotic melee outside your window off, scrub it out of your hair, as you face the mysteries of a new day, fresh-faced, smiling, loving, arms open.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  16. Amaya says:

    I like this boldness, Sanaa:
    “let us stare
    into the eyes of time, the unthinkable”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Amaya 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  17. Misky says:

    That second stanza is like the main course to a lovely meal.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Misky 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  18. mj smith says:

    The line breaks work very well to highlight the repetitions, creating anaphora here and there, especially with let…let…let. And you make a good paraphrase of the Richard Wilbur title, “Love Calls Us to the Things of this World.”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, M.J 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  19. A wonderful poem of deep thought and wisdom! I love the ‘Freshly baked hope and political salad dressing!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Dwight 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  20. rob kistner says:

    I greet the day
    with fire in my soul
    and determination raging my breast

    Rage on rage on! I like the power and relentless durection of this piece Sanaa. I really like the Photoshop FX on the photo!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rob 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  21. Jade Li says:

    Sanaa, both grounded and ethereal, it is beautiful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Jade 😀 so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️

  22. Grace says:

    I love that last stanza starting with: I greet the day
    with fire in my soul. Have a good weekend!!!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Grace 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

      You too, have a lovely weekend 🌹

  23. My favorite lines:
    “my mind
    ponders over political salad dressing
    where vegetable bits
    turn one against something as relevant
    as kosher salt;”

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  24. Mish says:

    Amen!
    I love the momentum of this poem, how it builds in thought and explodes into what I view as a powerful plea or prayer for change. This is absolutely beautiful, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Mish 😀 so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️

  25. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice ending about ploughing peace as a principle.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Frank 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  26. Gina says:

    i love the slow languid rising Sanaa, a sensuous arising of oneself to the problems,and feeling creeping in empowers the soul, such powerful writing

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gina 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  27. kaykuala h says:

    come let us plough peace
    as our new principle.

    It is so elusive. If only peace can be accepted in the same spirit as the fine weather of the day!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Hank ❤️

  28. Poppy says:

    I greet the day
    with fire in my soul
    and determination raging in my breast,
    let there be a breeze of change

    Your youth and strength and vitality is so evident in this lovely write, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Poppy 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  29. Lona Gynt says:

    Truly we should beat our swords into plowshares. Stunning tilt from sweet softness to madness and back again

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Lona 😀 so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

  30. Sara McNulty says:

    “This morning wasn’t grey
    rather
    it was dipped into soothing lavender ”

    Love this imagery. My hope is with your ending.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Sara 😀 so good to see you ❤️

  31. Nuzhat Markhiani says:

    Wow! What a poem Sanaa! Huge fan of your poetry. Love the way you paint your thoughts with your unique style like freshly baked hope , political salad dressing and veg. bits…..or plough peace. Just love it. Proud of you my child. Hope your poetry brings a positive change. Be blessed.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Awwww gosh! ❤️ Thank you so much, Nuzhat aunty 😍 so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️

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