44 thoughts on “Haiku – Love”

  1. Hannah Gosselin says:
    April 9, 2015 at 6:11 pm

    What a sweet scene and great choice of form to express it in…brevity suits well, I think!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 6:13 pm

      Hello Hannah,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciate your kind words 🙂
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  2. Mama Zen says:
    April 9, 2015 at 6:52 pm

    This is so sweet!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 6:55 pm

      Hello Mama Zen,

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it 😀
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  3. Debi says:
    April 9, 2015 at 7:01 pm

    Tender Haiku and lovely picture you chose.

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 7:04 pm

      Hello Debi,

      Thank you so much 😀 So glad you liked it dear!
      Highly appreciated 😀
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  4. Buddah Moskowitz says:
    April 9, 2015 at 7:14 pm

    Beautiful.

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 7:27 pm

      Hello Moskowitz,

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  5. blogoratti says:
    April 9, 2015 at 7:35 pm

    Simple, emotive, love the transition!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 7:45 pm

      Hello Blogoratti,

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  6. Jim says:
    April 9, 2015 at 8:25 pm

    A sweet and soft haiku, Sanaa. Perfect for love.
    The picture also fits your writing nicely.
    Yesterday I posted late but it was also a Love Poem:
    http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2015/04/writing-love-poems-revisited-day-8-of.html
    ..

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 8:58 pm

      Hello Jim,

      Thank you! Glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated 🙂

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  7. angie says:
    April 9, 2015 at 9:47 pm

    This is a super sweet haiku. And of course I’d expect you to rhyme it. Rhyming is unconventional for haiku, but I like it &it works.

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 9:51 pm

      Hello Angie,

      Thanks for stopping by 😀
      Hmm yeah I know its sort of unconventional but can’t help it 😀
      Glad you liked it 😀
      Highly appreciated!
      xoxo

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  8. gillena says:
    April 9, 2015 at 10:19 pm

    absolutely gorgeous haiku, luv the pivot of Line2

    thanks for dropping in to read mine

    much love…

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 10:22 pm

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it dear 😀
      Highly appreciated 🙂
      xoxo

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  9. Ella says:
    April 9, 2015 at 10:45 pm

    Subtle, sweet and sensuous! I love it~

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 9, 2015 at 11:31 pm

      Hello Ella,

      Thank you! So glad you liked it dear 😀
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  10. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:
    April 10, 2015 at 2:54 am

    Oh yes, your haiku is perfect for this!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 3:50 am

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much 😀 So glad you liked it dear
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  11. Helen says:
    April 10, 2015 at 2:58 am

    … perfect.

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 3:51 am

      Hi Helen,

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  12. Susie Clevenger says:
    April 10, 2015 at 3:04 am

    Perfect words for the painting

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 3:52 am

      Hello Susie,

      Thank you!! So sweet of you 😀
      Highly appreciated 😀
      xoxo

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  13. CC Champagne says:
    April 10, 2015 at 5:39 am

    I’ve always loved poetry inspired by the great masters, and this poem is no exception. Beautiful!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 12:27 pm

      Hello CC,

      That is a huge compliment! Thank you so much! 😀
      So glad you liked it! Highly appreciated 😀
      xoxo

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  14. grapeling says:
    April 10, 2015 at 5:55 am

    this senryu is well suited to the image ~

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 12:26 pm

      Hello Grapeling,

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  15. Amrit Sinha says:
    April 10, 2015 at 6:55 am

    Hand in glove – loved this comparison.

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 12:25 pm

      Hello Amrit,

      Thanks! Glad you liked it 😀
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  16. Keith's Ramblings says:
    April 10, 2015 at 11:51 am

    So lovely!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 12:24 pm

      Hello Keith,

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  17. Manicddaily says:
    April 10, 2015 at 12:30 pm

    Super charming. Thanks. k.

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 12:32 pm

      Hello Manicddaily,

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  18. Susan says:
    April 10, 2015 at 4:01 pm

    And there is the hand touch, the ungloved ready to glove. Very fine!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 4:29 pm

      Hello Susan,

      Thank you so much! So glad you liked it 😀
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      xoxo

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  19. Jennifer Wagner says:
    April 10, 2015 at 4:54 pm

    Marvelous!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 5:22 pm

      Hello Jennifer,

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  20. L. Moon says:
    April 10, 2015 at 10:23 pm

    Renoir and love a perfect combination Sunaa

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 10:37 pm

      Hello Leslie,

      Thank you! So glad you liked it 😀
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  21. Grace says:
    April 10, 2015 at 10:43 pm

    Sweet haiku I like it very much 🙂

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 10, 2015 at 11:19 pm

      Hello Grace,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 😀
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      xoxo

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  22. Other Mary says:
    April 11, 2015 at 11:31 am

    Yes, just like that!

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    1. adashofsunny says:
      April 11, 2015 at 11:38 am

      Hello Mary,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it 🙂
      Highly appreciated!
      xoxo

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