Early Spring

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I gaze breathless, as morning sun shines 
upon burgeoning buds, listening to birds
as they spread joy throughout the world.
In Spring I found longing tasted sweet —
and waves that echo passion rush swiftly
towards my feet. Such are thoughts, that 
revive my dreams. 

 

 

Photo credits: Pinterest

Posted on Quadrille # 28 @ dVerse Poets Pub

For upcoming, On Popular Demand – We write to rekindle the inner spirit – [13]
on Friday 17th March at 8:00 am EDT.

& Posted for Poems written on Prompt Nights

 

Posted for the Tuesday Platform @ Real Toads

Comments

  1. Frank Hubeny says:

    Birds and spring in general spread joy without realizing it or perhaps just because they are themselves joyful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Frank 😀

  2. Xenia says:

    Beautiful Sanaa, I can hear the ‘birds as they spread joy throughout the world’ :o) xxx

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Xenia 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  3. Bjorn Rudberg says:

    I think that the essence of spring is more the longing than the burst.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Bjorn 😀

  4. thotpurge says:

    Cheers to those spring dreams..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Rajani 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

      Cheers!❤️

  5. I like Bjorn’s /more the longing than the burst/ like a craving of dessert, or sex without love. Your internal rhymes work well too.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Glenn 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  6. A little gem and love the image you create of passion rushing to your feet. Nice!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  7. Gina says:

    Very very good image of spring especially the words dream, it is a very dreamy season, I loved your painting of this beautiful picture in my mind.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, Gina 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️

  8. Bev says:

    Our “burgeoning buds” got snowed on this morning, but hopefully this is winter’s last gasp, and “waves that echo passion” will be rushing my feet any time now. Great read!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Beverly 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  9. Victoria says:

    Oh, I knew I could expect a bit of Wordsworth or Browning from you, dear Sanaa. And you didn’t let me down.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, Victoria 😀 so glad you enjoyed it!❤️

      I’ll be right over to visit!❤️

  10. Grace says:

    Can’t wait for the birdsongs of spring Sanaa ~ That longing is long but the arrival is sweet ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Grace 😀

  11. I love those words: ‘In Spring I found longing tasted sweet’, and can taste the freshness on the air in your words, Sanaa. Thank goodness for burgeoning buds and birds!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, Kim 😀 so glad you liked it! ❤️

  12. Wolfsrosebud says:

    Spring dreams… I like that!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Wolfsrosebud ❤️

  13. De Jackson says:

    Beautiful, Sanaa.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, De 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  14. gillena says:

    Sweet write Sanaa. My favorite lines

    In Spring I found longing tasted sweet —

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  15. Dreamlike imagery in this piece.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria 🙂 good to see you ❤️

  16. Truedessa says:

    I really enjoyed this one, you captured the beauty of longing for spring and all it offers..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Truedessa 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  17. Imelda says:

    “listening to birds” … that I have found myself doing lately – specifically, for the call of the Cardinal. It is quite comforting to hear it trilling from the treetops in the morning.

    “longing tasted sweet” indeed, knowing that it will be met soon. Your piece resonates with me. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Imelda 🙂 for your kind and thoughtful comment ❤️

  18. Marina Sofia says:

    Ah, those sweet longings awakening… lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Marina 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  19. Cressida says:

    A lovely breath of Spring.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Cressida 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  20. Kerry O'Connor says:

    We all need such wonderful thoughts of Springtime to revive our souls.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Kerry 😀

  21. Josslyn Rae Turner says:

    Beautiful! <3

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Josslyn 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  22. paul scribbles says:

    Oooooooh…this felt like a luxuriously long and slow morning stretch. Fabulous.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Paul 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  23. Just Barry says:

    I hear the birds singing, and I am renewed through your words.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Barry 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  24. Janice says:

    Beautiful :))

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Janice 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  25. gillena says:

    May Spring bring you Joy

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gillena 🙂 so good to see you ❤️

  26. Marian says:

    Beautiful. We just got a ton of snow on top of all that. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Marian 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  27. Steve King says:

    You begin with the external manifestations of Spring, and those quickly become surrogates for the internal reawakening of life. So much packed into so few lines.
    Steve K

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Steve 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  28. And my dreams too! Lovely write!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Bekkie 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  29. Jim says:

    “In the spring a young (person’s) fancy turns … to … love.”
    ..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ Thanks for stopping by, Jim 🙂

  30. Rhythms
    oF SeaSon
    Beat heavier
    as SpRing
    SuMmer
    Heat
    riSing
    PasSioN
    oF liFe
    STiLL
    Dances Sings FaLL
    As WiNter cliMate
    Changes LiFe wiTHiN LIGht..:)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Katie 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  31. Jennifer says:

    This has such a serene feeling to it… sigh… beautifully done ❤

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Jennifer 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  32. Old Egg says:

    That beautiful anticipation of love nothing quite beats that except perhaps the togetherness.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Robin 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  33. Ellecee says:

    This is so lovely, it renews my hope, and helps sooth my longing for Spring to arrive. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Linda 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

  34. ZQ says:

    You’ve always been “A Dash Of Sunny” 🙂
    ZQ

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, ZQ 🙂 so good to see you!❤️

  35. kaykuala h says:

    Such are thoughts, that
    revive my dreams.

    Great to relate back to wonderful memories!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Hank 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️

  36. I love the idea of longing tasting sweet… because we know something good is coming.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Definitely ❤️ thanks for stopping by, Magaly 😀

  37. Rasz says:

    Beautiful…I could hear the Spring songs chirping.
    (My first visit, recommended by Magaly and will not be my last)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww!❤️ Thank you so much, Rasz 😀 so glad you liked it!❤️

  38. Gina says:

    Such a beautiful image…I could smell the warmth of the sap rising to revive stiff limbs 😀 XXX

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Gina 😀 so glad you liked it ❤️

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