For my prompt ‘In dreams we enter a world that’s entirely
our own’ tomorrow at 8 am EDT.
Poems written on Prompt Nights
Posted on OLN @ dVerse Poets Pub
& Music Prompt 53 @ Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie
60 thoughts on “Dreams”
The opening couplet makes it seem like there was rain outside, but once lost in the dream, the world outside seemed to become distant. I can relate to that.
Your poem feels as soft and delicate as the painting, Sanaa. I too love your deliberate use of the same line in opening and closing this beautiful work.
The rain does put a dampener of the sun’s smile doesn’t it? It is almost as though a dream of love has been thwarted by the change in weather, however that kiss made it seem right after all.
I like your usage of the word ‘dimmer’. It immediately creates a feeling of slowly going down a path. And then the reality starts fading slowly.
Good one.
Oh, the mystery and fascination of dreams! Yours sounds romantic especially with pelts of rain, sunset’s gleam and all things beautiful present in this dream. Beautifully written!
So late to my reading — apologies!
Such a beautiful write. The first and last line become for me, almost like a mirror. I stand and look within…..and there is the image looking back at me….these feelings when wind blew words along the skies…..
and I love the image you’ve chosen here. The softness in the image and in your words. Just truly lovely.
The opening couplet makes it seem like there was rain outside, but once lost in the dream, the world outside seemed to become distant. I can relate to that.
I am glad you could relate to the poem. Thanks Vinay 🙂
Just gorgeous poem! love the use of the same line for opening and closing.
Thank you so much Toni 😀 it was deliberate ❤️
Your poem feels as soft and delicate as the painting, Sanaa. I too love your deliberate use of the same line in opening and closing this beautiful work.
Thank you for your kind words Gayle 🙂
A lovely ethereal poem as I was floating along.
Thanks for your support Sanaa and wishing you a good week.
Thank you Grace 😀 wish you a wonderful week too.
Oh such beautiful words and such a wondrous dream. Wish I was there…
Kind regards
Anna o]
Thank you kindly, Anna 🙂
Sanaa, your poem has a romantic dreaminess like whispering in my ear. I like the way it goes full circle. xxx
Thank you so much Kim 🙂 xo
Elegantly voiced and a delight to absorb and wander through 🙂
Thank you so much Poppy 😀
This makes me think of those beautiful lucid dreams that only visit us once in awhile. Beautiful description and dreamlike imagery.
I am so glad you liked it Victoria 🙂
The dream of your imagination is marvelous and the opening lines bring a whole new richness in the thought and creative world of dreams.
I relate to this a lot. 🙂
Thank you so much Charlie 😀
Enchanting atmosphere in this, Sanaa. I love the prompt. Perhaps I will have time to post. My life has been chaotic this summer.
Thank you so much Victoria ❤️ hope you join us.
You write with such passion, Sanaa! I love coming to read your works!
Aww shucks, thanks Walter 🙂
Dimmer dream… intriguing.
Glad you thought so, thotpurge 🙂
it sounds like a midsummer night’s dream, etheric and mysterious.
Thanks Walter 🙂 so glad you liked it.
Just lovely Sanaa, repetition always works so well for me….
Thank you so much Michael 🙂
This is just beautiful, Sanaa! ❤️
Thanks Josslyn ❤️
Dreams washing from rain to the streams…words flowing in the sky. Nice contrasts, and an artful set of bookends to this delicious dream.
Thank you for your kind words Steve 🙂
How nice it is to dream good dreams. One can dream away to the heart’s content as long as necessary!
Hank
Glad you think so too, Hank 😀
Luv your entrance into the dream. Sinking in and leaving The Real behind
Much love…
Thank you so much Gillena ❤
“while wind blew word along the skies”
love that
Thank you kindly, Sue 🙂
So dreamy and ethereal.
Thank you so much Debi 😀
How I love the image of those words gliding along the sky. This is sweet and delicious, Sanaa. ❤️
I m glad you think so, Magaly ❤️ thank you 😀
The rain does put a dampener of the sun’s smile doesn’t it? It is almost as though a dream of love has been thwarted by the change in weather, however that kiss made it seem right after all.
Thanks Robin 🙂 glad you liked it.
Incredibly beautiful.
Thank you so much Rosemary ❤
I like your usage of the word ‘dimmer’. It immediately creates a feeling of slowly going down a path. And then the reality starts fading slowly.
Good one.
–Nimi Arora
http://www.NimiArora.com
Thanks Nimi 🙂 glad you stopped by.
Sanaa, again you have penned some beautiful words “while wind blew words along the sky”. Love and Light.
Thank you so much, Julian 🙂
This is a lovely poem, I can feel myself within her dream,,,beautiful,,,
Thanks Ellecee 😀 so glad you liked the poem.
Very romantic – beautifully done.
Thank you Freya 😀
Oh, the mystery and fascination of dreams! Yours sounds romantic especially with pelts of rain, sunset’s gleam and all things beautiful present in this dream. Beautifully written!
Thanks Khaya ❤ so wonderful to see you again 😀
So late to my reading — apologies!
Such a beautiful write. The first and last line become for me, almost like a mirror. I stand and look within…..and there is the image looking back at me….these feelings when wind blew words along the skies…..
and I love the image you’ve chosen here. The softness in the image and in your words. Just truly lovely.
Thank you so much Lillian ❤️ really appreciate it 😀
Absolutely stunning poem, Sanaa! I felt like I was in the dream of a dream.
Thank you so much Sara 😀