60 thoughts on “Dreams

  1. Vinay Leo R. says:

    The opening couplet makes it seem like there was rain outside, but once lost in the dream, the world outside seemed to become distant. I can relate to that.

    1. Sanaa says:

      I am glad you could relate to the poem. Thanks Vinay 🙂

  2. kanzensakura says:

    Just gorgeous poem! love the use of the same line for opening and closing.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Toni 😀 it was deliberate ❤️

  3. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    Your poem feels as soft and delicate as the painting, Sanaa. I too love your deliberate use of the same line in opening and closing this beautiful work.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you for your kind words Gayle 🙂

  4. Grace says:

    A lovely ethereal poem as I was floating along.

    Thanks for your support Sanaa and wishing you a good week.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you Grace 😀 wish you a wonderful week too.

  5. Anna :o] says:

    Oh such beautiful words and such a wondrous dream. Wish I was there…
    Kind regards
    Anna o]

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Anna 🙂

  6. Sanaa, your poem has a romantic dreaminess like whispering in my ear. I like the way it goes full circle. xxx

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Kim 🙂 xo

  7. Poppy Silver says:

    Elegantly voiced and a delight to absorb and wander through 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Poppy 😀

  8. This makes me think of those beautiful lucid dreams that only visit us once in awhile. Beautiful description and dreamlike imagery.

    1. Sanaa says:

      I am so glad you liked it Victoria 🙂

  9. The dream of your imagination is marvelous and the opening lines bring a whole new richness in the thought and creative world of dreams.

    I relate to this a lot. 🙂

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Charlie 😀

  10. Victoria says:

    Enchanting atmosphere in this, Sanaa. I love the prompt. Perhaps I will have time to post. My life has been chaotic this summer.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Victoria ❤️ hope you join us.

  11. You write with such passion, Sanaa! I love coming to read your works!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Aww shucks, thanks Walter 🙂

  12. Thotpurge says:

    Dimmer dream… intriguing.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Glad you thought so, thotpurge 🙂

  13. Walter Marks says:

    it sounds like a midsummer night’s dream, etheric and mysterious.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Walter 🙂 so glad you liked it.

  14. Michael says:

    Just lovely Sanaa, repetition always works so well for me….

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Michael 🙂

  15. This is just beautiful, Sanaa! ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Josslyn ❤️

  16. Steve King says:

    Dreams washing from rain to the streams…words flowing in the sky. Nice contrasts, and an artful set of bookends to this delicious dream.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you for your kind words Steve 🙂

  17. kaykuala h says:

    How nice it is to dream good dreams. One can dream away to the heart’s content as long as necessary!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Glad you think so too, Hank 😀

  18. gillena says:

    Luv your entrance into the dream. Sinking in and leaving The Real behind

    Much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Gillena ❤

  19. Sue Anderson says:

    “while wind blew word along the skies”

    love that

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you kindly, Sue 🙂

  20. debi says:

    So dreamy and ethereal.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Debi 😀

  21. How I love the image of those words gliding along the sky. This is sweet and delicious, Sanaa. ❤️

    1. Sanaa says:

      I m glad you think so, Magaly ❤️ thank you 😀

  22. Old Egg says:

    The rain does put a dampener of the sun’s smile doesn’t it? It is almost as though a dream of love has been thwarted by the change in weather, however that kiss made it seem right after all.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Robin 🙂 glad you liked it.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Rosemary ❤

  23. Nimi Arora says:

    I like your usage of the word ‘dimmer’. It immediately creates a feeling of slowly going down a path. And then the reality starts fading slowly.
    Good one.

    –Nimi Arora
    http://www.NimiArora.com

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Nimi 🙂 glad you stopped by.

  24. Julian says:

    Sanaa, again you have penned some beautiful words “while wind blew words along the sky”. Love and Light.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much, Julian 🙂

  25. Ellecee says:

    This is a lovely poem, I can feel myself within her dream,,,beautiful,,,

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Ellecee 😀 so glad you liked the poem.

  26. Freya says:

    Very romantic – beautifully done.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you Freya 😀

  27. Oh, the mystery and fascination of dreams! Yours sounds romantic especially with pelts of rain, sunset’s gleam and all things beautiful present in this dream. Beautifully written!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thanks Khaya ❤ so wonderful to see you again 😀

  28. lillian says:

    So late to my reading — apologies!
    Such a beautiful write. The first and last line become for me, almost like a mirror. I stand and look within…..and there is the image looking back at me….these feelings when wind blew words along the skies…..
    and I love the image you’ve chosen here. The softness in the image and in your words. Just truly lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Lillian ❤️ really appreciate it 😀

  29. Sara McNulty says:

    Absolutely stunning poem, Sanaa! I felt like I was in the dream of a dream.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Thank you so much Sara 😀

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