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For my prompt ‘In dreams we enter a world that’s entirely
our own’ tomorrow at 8 am EDT.

Poems written on Prompt Nights


Posted on OLN @ dVerse Poets Pub


& Music Prompt 53 @ Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie

60 Replies to “Dreams”

  1. Your poem feels as soft and delicate as the painting, Sanaa. I too love your deliberate use of the same line in opening and closing this beautiful work.

  2. The rain does put a dampener of the sun’s smile doesn’t it? It is almost as though a dream of love has been thwarted by the change in weather, however that kiss made it seem right after all.

  3. Oh, the mystery and fascination of dreams! Yours sounds romantic especially with pelts of rain, sunset’s gleam and all things beautiful present in this dream. Beautifully written!

  4. So late to my reading — apologies!
    Such a beautiful write. The first and last line become for me, almost like a mirror. I stand and look within…..and there is the image looking back at me….these feelings when wind blew words along the skies…..
    and I love the image you’ve chosen here. The softness in the image and in your words. Just truly lovely.

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