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For my prompt ‘In dreams we enter a world that’s entirely
our own’ tomorrow at 8 am EDT.
Poems written on Prompt Nights
Posted on OLN @ dVerse Poets Pub
Photo credits: wallpaperpixel.com
For my prompt ‘In dreams we enter a world that’s entirely
our own’ tomorrow at 8 am EDT.
60 Responses
The opening couplet makes it seem like there was rain outside, but once lost in the dream, the world outside seemed to become distant. I can relate to that.
I am glad you could relate to the poem. Thanks Vinay 🙂
Just gorgeous poem! love the use of the same line for opening and closing.
Thank you so much Toni 😀 it was deliberate ❤️
Your poem feels as soft and delicate as the painting, Sanaa. I too love your deliberate use of the same line in opening and closing this beautiful work.
Thank you for your kind words Gayle 🙂
A lovely ethereal poem as I was floating along.
Thanks for your support Sanaa and wishing you a good week.
Thank you Grace 😀 wish you a wonderful week too.
Oh such beautiful words and such a wondrous dream. Wish I was there…
Kind regards
Anna o]
Thank you kindly, Anna 🙂
Sanaa, your poem has a romantic dreaminess like whispering in my ear. I like the way it goes full circle. xxx
Thank you so much Kim 🙂 xo
Elegantly voiced and a delight to absorb and wander through 🙂
Thank you so much Poppy 😀
This makes me think of those beautiful lucid dreams that only visit us once in awhile. Beautiful description and dreamlike imagery.
I am so glad you liked it Victoria 🙂
The dream of your imagination is marvelous and the opening lines bring a whole new richness in the thought and creative world of dreams.
I relate to this a lot. 🙂
Thank you so much Charlie 😀
Enchanting atmosphere in this, Sanaa. I love the prompt. Perhaps I will have time to post. My life has been chaotic this summer.
Thank you so much Victoria ❤️ hope you join us.
You write with such passion, Sanaa! I love coming to read your works!
Aww shucks, thanks Walter 🙂
Dimmer dream… intriguing.
Glad you thought so, thotpurge 🙂
it sounds like a midsummer night’s dream, etheric and mysterious.
Thanks Walter 🙂 so glad you liked it.
Just lovely Sanaa, repetition always works so well for me….
Thank you so much Michael 🙂
This is just beautiful, Sanaa! ❤️
Thanks Josslyn ❤️
Dreams washing from rain to the streams…words flowing in the sky. Nice contrasts, and an artful set of bookends to this delicious dream.
Thank you for your kind words Steve 🙂
How nice it is to dream good dreams. One can dream away to the heart’s content as long as necessary!
Hank
Glad you think so too, Hank 😀
Luv your entrance into the dream. Sinking in and leaving The Real behind
Much love…
Thank you so much Gillena ❤
“while wind blew word along the skies”
love that
Thank you kindly, Sue 🙂
So dreamy and ethereal.
Thank you so much Debi 😀
How I love the image of those words gliding along the sky. This is sweet and delicious, Sanaa. ❤️
I m glad you think so, Magaly ❤️ thank you 😀
The rain does put a dampener of the sun’s smile doesn’t it? It is almost as though a dream of love has been thwarted by the change in weather, however that kiss made it seem right after all.
Thanks Robin 🙂 glad you liked it.
Incredibly beautiful.
Thank you so much Rosemary ❤
I like your usage of the word ‘dimmer’. It immediately creates a feeling of slowly going down a path. And then the reality starts fading slowly.
Good one.
–Nimi Arora
http://www.NimiArora.com
Thanks Nimi 🙂 glad you stopped by.
Sanaa, again you have penned some beautiful words “while wind blew words along the sky”. Love and Light.
Thank you so much, Julian 🙂
This is a lovely poem, I can feel myself within her dream,,,beautiful,,,
Thanks Ellecee 😀 so glad you liked the poem.
Very romantic – beautifully done.
Thank you Freya 😀
Oh, the mystery and fascination of dreams! Yours sounds romantic especially with pelts of rain, sunset’s gleam and all things beautiful present in this dream. Beautifully written!
Thanks Khaya ❤ so wonderful to see you again 😀
So late to my reading — apologies!
Such a beautiful write. The first and last line become for me, almost like a mirror. I stand and look within…..and there is the image looking back at me….these feelings when wind blew words along the skies…..
and I love the image you’ve chosen here. The softness in the image and in your words. Just truly lovely.
Thank you so much Lillian ❤️ really appreciate it 😀
Absolutely stunning poem, Sanaa! I felt like I was in the dream of a dream.
Thank you so much Sara 😀