Wow, I loved how bravely you moved stanzas around on the page (one of my stylistic quirks), and split words into duplicity. I have never seen you write like this; it thrills me. somehow the poem emerges, with its refrains like one of the forms we’ve worked on in the past–over all, it rocked the prompt & stretched your own poetic horizons; smile.
Whoa! Sanaa! I love it that you are experimenting with your wonderful expressions of life in your poetry.
This was one of my awakening of self songs (there were many) that Bob Dylan passed on to me: “Ramona”
This is so different from you.. the wordplay is great, and using blowing in the wind is perfect.
Thank you so much, Bjorn 🙂 it was an inspirational prompt ❤️
Intriguing … like a Bob Dylan lyric.
Thank you kindly, Buddah 🙂 good to see you.
Not just a clever looking poem but really has such insight into our fragile condition. Beautiful wording.
Thank you so much, Georgina ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Nice that we were inspired by the same song…perhaps the answer lies with the wind ~
Thanks for playing along ~
My pleasure, Grace ❤️ good to see you 🙂
A cool response to the prompt, and interesting to see a different format from you.
Thank you so much, Sherry ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
I agree with Bjorn on this – I like the change in direction and the play on words, Sanaa!
Thank you kindly, Kim ❤️ good to see you 🙂
Very cool form to this. Each “column” has its own voice, but all work together.
Thank you so much, Bryan 🙂 so glad you liked it ❤️
Your poem is great. I feel the bone-deep weariness and the questions unanswered in countless tomes of thought. I like the pattern too.
Thank you kindly, Brian 🙂 good to see you ❤️
loved the unique form your words took here – and the second stanza about looks not counting for everything we see!
Thank you so much, Laura ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
This is great–making me want to sing “Blowing in the Wind” for the rest of the day. Nice creative take on the prompt.
Thank you so much, Victoria ❤️ so nice to see you 🙂
Wonderful visual representation of form and the content is very well pieced together in response to Mr Bob’s lyrics.
Thank you kindly, Paul 🙂 good to see you.
Wow, I loved how bravely you moved stanzas around on the page (one of my stylistic quirks), and split words into duplicity. I have never seen you write like this; it thrills me. somehow the poem emerges, with its refrains like one of the forms we’ve worked on in the past–over all, it rocked the prompt & stretched your own poetic horizons; smile.
Thank you so much, Glenn 😀 good to see you ❤️
Your form is captivating. I love how you can play with omitting lines here and there, yet the overall poem remains exceptional.
I see so much Dylan in this.
Thank you so much, Stacy ❤️ so glad you liked it 🙂
Whoa! Sanaa! I love it that you are experimenting with your wonderful expressions of life in your poetry.
This was one of my awakening of self songs (there were many) that Bob Dylan passed on to me: “Ramona”
Thank you so much 🙂 so glad you liked it. Loved “Ramona” ❤️ such a cool song.
Unique…beautiful…and makes one to think …!
Thank you so much, Sreeja 🙂 so glad you liked it.