30 thoughts on “With the Wind

  1. Glenn Buttkus says:

    Wow, I loved how bravely you moved stanzas around on the page (one of my stylistic quirks), and split words into duplicity. I have never seen you write like this; it thrills me. somehow the poem emerges, with its refrains like one of the forms we’ve worked on in the past–over all, it rocked the prompt & stretched your own poetic horizons; smile.

  2. ZQ says:

    Whoa! Sanaa! I love it that you are experimenting with your wonderful expressions of life in your poetry.
    This was one of my awakening of self songs (there were many) that Bob Dylan passed on to me: “Ramona”

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