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  1. Grace says:

    I love the words hanging down the page like its floating in the dust ~ I would love to travel as if the oceans had no boundaries ~

    Thanks for participating Sanaa & wishing you happy week ~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Grace,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  2. Suzanne says:

    Your poem dances like a will-o-wisp travelling here and there on a whim.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Suzanne,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  3. Mary says:

    I found myself enjoying wandering through the wandering words of your poem. Enjoyed your technique, Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Sherry,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  4. I love your dance, it is beautiful and boundless

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Pleasant Street,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  5. Ella says:

    So, lovely and beautiful~ I, too felt my mind, wander and float with your guided hand~

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Ella,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  6. kanzensakura says:

    What a fun, flitty, jaunty travel poem! As if oceans had no boundaries what an incredible thought.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Toni,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  7. Thotpurge says:

    That’s a lovely shape poem Sanaa…enjoy your travels.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Thotpurge,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  8. Gayle Walters Rose says:

    This is really creative and fun…love those dangling words that continue our journey down the page reading your words.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gayle,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  9. CC says:

    I like the feel of this, the look of it….I think you’ve accomplished that open-ended freedom feel of travel by the way you’ve placed the words on the page. Beautiful. Fresh. Lovely.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello C.C

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  10. Bjorn says:

    The world’s an oyster… what a wonderful springboard.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Bjorn,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

      1. Love to walk these paths again… wonderful

        1. Sanaa says:

          Hello Bjorn,

          Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
          Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  11. A spiral
    flow knows
    feels no sidewalks
    of dance.. oh.. to
    stream a river
    ocean
    nows
    living
    whole..
    galaxies
    Universe feat us..:)

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Katie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  12. kaykuala h says:

    Nicely set Sanaa! The unique way presented created a show of movement along the way. It very much tallied with the travel mode!

    Hank

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  13. Suyash Jha says:

    Now that was an amazing form, captures the wanderlust spirit very well. Great write Sanaa!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Suyash,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  14. lynn__ says:

    Creative shape, Sanaa…your poem weaves and flows with travel fever/wanderlust…and takes your reader along for the trip!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Lynn,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  15. beautiful, hopeful and youthful

    gracias for sharing the spirit of your heart and soul

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Marco,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  16. georgina says:

    I love your words but am very impressed as to how you have made them shape the page. Some hints please!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Georgina,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  17. I love how you opened this poem with the visual artistry and word….beckoning us to breathe along with you. An amazing journey moving down the words.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Donna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  18. dsnake1 says:

    great shape poem, love how the letters and words really “wander”. like the tone of the poem too.
    and oh yes, great photo! πŸ˜‰

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Dsnake,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  19. Jae Rose says:

    I love the shape of this wonderful poem – like a dance and the very best of dreams…beautiful and joyful as always

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Jae Rose,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  20. Mary says:

    Visiting again – smiles! I do like the way you are so very open to experimentation with poetry. This is a delightful read.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Mary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  21. HA says:

    I love the way you have presented your words; my eyes go all over the page. It gives it such a scenic quality, much like the verse. πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Anmol,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  22. You’ve done this beautifully. The shape enhances the sense.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Rosemary,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  23. humbird says:

    Beautiful! What fun you had with the words! Cheers! πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Humbird,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  24. Wow! I love the form of the poem and the words are equally beautiful.
    A delightful Sunday read πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Purba,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Carol,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  25. Truedessa says:

    I like the shape of your poem and the movement of your words…strategically placed to take the reader with you…light and breezy..

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Truedessa,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  26. gillena says:

    Luv this shaped poem Sanaa, and the words are so commanding, one wants to wander along with your persona here.

    Have a lovely Sunday, I’m happy you dropped in at my Sunday Lime

    much love…

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Gillena,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ˜€
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ™‚
      xoxo

  27. I loved the dancing words…they have accentuated your poem making it more meaningful… πŸ™‚

    Very nicely penned… πŸ™‚

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Maniparna,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  28. Old Egg says:

    How delightfully inventive this form was to beautifully illustrate your poem with feelings you no doubt you share yourself!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Old Egg,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

  29. Wendy Bourke says:

    A joyful cascade of words … LIBERATING!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Wendy,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  30. Myrna says:

    I love the shape of this, the words, the meaning, the rhymes. It’s beautiful.

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Myrna,

      Thank you so much, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, lots of love πŸ˜€
      xoxo

  31. Brother Ollie says:

    Such a cool style!

    1. Sanaa says:

      Hello Brother Ollie,

      Thanks for stopping by, so glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Highly appreciated, have a great week ahead.

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