Voice of Nature

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I listen to the voice of Nature’s soul;
The leaves in autumn shine like gold.
The calming breeze soothes the nerves;
What more of miracle could be told.

The leaves in autumn shine like gold;
I half forget how time has flown.
What more of miracle could be told;
How Nature affects the young and old.

I half forget how time has flown;
The calming breeze soothes the nerves.
How Nature affects the young and old;
I listen to the voice of Nature’s soul.

 

 

Photo Credits:Β 1ms.net

Form: Β Pantoum

Posted for Poetics @ dVerse Poets Pub

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38 thoughts on “Voice of Nature

  1. X says:

    Nature has an old soul, and relating nature to a mother is fitting as she cares for us whenever we come. And no matter how long it is between our visits. Effective use of form too, as nature often seems to move in cycles.

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  2. CC says:

    “the voice of Nature’s soul”—I like this line, and the repetition of it in your poem….I hear the voice of Nature’s soul as soothing and healing. Thank you for adding your voice to this prompt, Sanaa πŸ™‚

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  3. magyar says:

    Hi Sunny,
    __How time has flown… such a warm vision and spurring verse! It seems that just last week I was 12 years old, but realistic accounting points to… 65 years ago.
    __My humble echo, as the leaves fall too_.

    far waterfall
    fills this forest pond
    golden leaves
    _m

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  4. Linda Kruschke says:

    Beautiful! I love the pantoum and it works quite well for this topic. I think that the key to a great pantoum is crafting the right first line, which becomes the last line. You have done just that. Peace, Linda

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  5. Bryan Ens says:

    “The calming breeze soothes the nerves;
    What more of miracle could be told.”
    – indeed, it is miraculous how soothing nature can be. Lovely pantoum!

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  6. Shawna says:

    “I listen to the voice of Nature’s soul”

    Oh my goodness! This is such a beautiful opening line. I love this. Yes, we should wake up every morning with this state of mind, just embracing nature’s soul with ours. I just adore this!

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